Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Our world has drastically changed when compared to the ancient times, due to the improvement of the studies in Science and also almost exponential in the growth of innovative creations in the world of technology. It is indeed true that the world's sciences and technological improvement has always been helpful to the humanity in a way that almost all of the human race is dependent on the technology. The advancements in science and technology has led to the human race living a world which was once thought of like a sci-fi movie. In the future, science and technology will be able to solve all of the society's problems because of three reasons.
All of the humanity is dependent on the growing technology, which already solved almost has all of the human problems, according to the human desire and demands. Now-a-days, the giant tech companies are becoming so competitive that they are trying to solve problems which didn't seem problematic at all in the technological market . For instance, one of the alpha companies Apple, is known for solving problems that are non-existent. Their idea to not ship packing boxes with their latest models of iPhones has to led to a global movement, where-in all the other tech companies in the tech world started following it's lead and stopped shipping packing boxes. This is in turn solving environmental problems by drastically reducing the production of waste materials and the energy it all takes to recycle the waste.
Not only that, but also many other tech giants are helping the humanity move forwrard in evolution. For example, the tech giant Elon Musk is one of the most influential people in the world right now. With his billion-dollar turn over companies, SpaceX, Tesla, SolarCity and NeuraLink, musk is creating not less than a revolution in the world of innovative solutions to the human societal problems. These companies each have different and most useful agendas, with SpaceX's rocket science and techonology, musk is houding to create life beyond Earth on Mars and make human life multi-planetory.Tesla has made a revolution in the electric car-making industry, thereby reducing the usage of limited resources such as petrol and oil. SolarCity is a company which is trying to reduce the use of electricity by utilizing solar power instead. NeuraLink is a project which has a main agenda to build an interface between technology and the human brain, increasing the human brain's memory, knowledge and many other capabilities.
Though it might seem like this vigorous growth in science and technology could cause irrepairable problems in the human society, it is evident that for most part of our future the science and technology is going to lead the humanity to a better and more useful society, eventually solving all the problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05422993492 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87532258968 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492407809111 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 735.3 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0476625241 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.625 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8125 23.4991977007 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286940112934 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106519289376 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143173830357 0.0758088955206 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188334293945 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0966682536524 0.0667264976115 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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