Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
Science is a vast field of study, that includes everything in the universe from small atoms to humungous galaxies. Technology is the application of science that involves machines ranging from simple calculators which help in our day-to-day mundane activities to space-vehicles for exploring the unknown. This prompt suggests that science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society's problems, and I strongly agree with this for the following reason.
The modern air-travel that we all use now was once seen as a mystery. Travelling between contintents in the old times was a travail process that took months or even years to complete. But,in this modern era, it only takes a couple of days to travel from one end of the world to other. When Wright brothers proposed the idea of travel through flight, everyone thought the idea was a squander of resources . In contrast it became one of the most useful innovations. The once thought as tiresome and long, was made to be instant by the curiosity of imagination.
Furthermore, The lifetime of an average human is alomst doubled thanks to all the medicines and medical-procedures invented. One simple example that can be the considered is the antibiotic. Though, common nowadays, people have suffered greately before its invention. Even the throat infection that is easily curable at the present was deadly in the former times. Science has cured most of the medical problems that existed in the society.All of these were possible mainly by information that had been gathered all those years of the past.
Finally, The invention of light bulb that cured the darkness of our society. Before the light bulb, people relied in other luminating substances like fire. Though it was helpful, often times, it might be harmful, as it is prone to causing fire accidents. Edison - the inventor of light bulb, was able to invent the light bulb as he had an idea and he implemented it. But, he didnt arrive at the solution at his first try. He put on great amount of effort to reach the final product. thus, not just imagination or information but effort is also needed to find a solution in science.
One can argue that, science and technology cannot always keep solving all the problems as it needs someone with skills to be able to find an optimal solution, But, as we saw in the above reasons, Science only need effort, imagination and information to solve any problem. Thus, we can say that in the future science and technology will be having a solution for all the problems in teh society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89400921659 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70352823058 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55069124424 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.2171992622 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.347826087 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8695652174 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39317843556 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845348608296 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124555945519 0.0758088955206 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215981481699 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167820339959 0.0667264976115 252% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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