Science is meaningless without religion.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
science is study of our sorroundings where as religion is what we believe in. From the primordial times people believed that there is creator for this world and each group of people had their own idea about how the creater would be. they had written many books about the creater and how he had created the world. this has paved a path to many religions and from then on their heirs started believing the same religious principles as their elders. The claim here suggests that science is meaningless without religion. I feel the claim is partially true.
there are many religions in the world like hindus, Muslims, Christians, Sikhs etc. Each one of them have their own religious books. if we consider the vedas one of the book which is believed by the hindus. In it the world is considered to be in one of the four time period. The book classifies the total time untill the world becomes extinct into four different time periods. it also describes about how the world is the going to change, what would the improvements, what would be the disadvantages, how people are going to behave. The book describes thatas the time increases the humanity would decrease in the world. it also specifies that the world would become more developed as time increases. In one of the branches of science we even determine how the world is going to be after a few years and what to do to avoid deleterious effects. this branch of science is analogous to the religious book veda as it describes all of it.
Let us take the festival of diwali. According to mythology we burn crackers on the day of diwali because Lord Rama had returned Ayodhya after killing Ravana so as a sign of happiness we do it. Behind this celebration there is also a scientific fact because diwali comes after the end of rainy season. In rainy season there are lot of musquitoes. At the end of the season when we burn crackers it kills them because of the smoke and it would help us eschew many diseases. In this case also a religious celebration was based on a scientific reason which supports the claim.
On the contrary if we take many advanced theories like string theory, dark matter etc they are all the reason of experimentation and thoughts of many scientists. These theories postulate the formation of universe which doesnt depend on the religion. it is based on facts.
To say that science is meaningless without religion would not be right. Though some part of may be based on religion we cannot consider the entire thing to be contingent on religion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, i feel, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2094.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 446.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69506726457 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54529736566 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464125560538 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 643.5 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0336283563 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5185185185 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908658752218 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316979002232 0.0831039109588 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393387339347 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607767127308 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233047880941 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.