Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim given here is that no act is done purely for the benefit of others and I accept this claim up to a major extent.I feel that all the acts done need not be self beneficial though it is true in most of the cases in today's world.
If we consider mother Teresa as an example she had served and helped people for the entire life not expecting any benefit out of her altruistic and benign nature. she had helped people with diseases like leprosy and homeless kids.she did'nt do all of that for her benefit and she rejected all kinds of financial trifles from people for herself.
In today's world we don't find people like mother Teresa.it's a generation filled with full of competition and not finding time for anyone but themselves. we find celebrity's doing many charity works now a days,though they do it for a good reason they still have a feeling in the heart that doing such works will augment their repute in the society.So even though they help people they do it for themselves partially.
In some cases people do some acts for others so that the other person might reciprocate when they are in need.So for these reasons I feel that no act is done purely for others in today's world even though there were instances of people who did things like that in the past.Every act has its ulterior motive behind it, motive can be a small one or a bigger one but it will be present for most of the cases.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... accept this claim up to a major extent.I feel that all the acts done need not be...
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...ut of her altruistic and benign nature. she had helped people with diseases like le...
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...ases like leprosy and homeless kids.she didnt do all of that for her benefit and she ...
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...self. In todays world we dont find people like mother Teresa.its a ge...
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... we dont find people like mother Teresa.its a generation filled with full of compet...
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...inding time for anyone but themselves. we find celebritys doing many charity work...
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Suggestion: many charities
...t themselves. we find celebritys doing many charity works now a days,though they do it for ...
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...ind celebritys doing many charity works now a days,though they do it for a good reason the...
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...celebritys doing many charity works now a days,though they do it for a good reason the...
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...ill augment their repute in the society.So even though they help people they do it...
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...might reciprocate when they are in need.So for these reasons I feel that no act is...
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...le who did things like that in the past.Every act has its ulterior motive behind it, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, i feel, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 2235.4752809 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 260.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53076923077 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23890756857 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.2156533867 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.333333333 118.986275619 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.3333333333 23.4991977007 184% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.21951772744 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300023027016 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156584315787 0.0831039109588 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103661478857 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202710386114 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972281007825 0.0667264976115 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 11.8971910112 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.