Should the organizations pursue only profit or do they have obligations to the society?
Any organization’s main purpose is to give profit to it’s owner. Even NGO’s with “non profitable objectives” need to make money in order to continue operating. Nevertheless, the fact is that every company is built and mantained in a society and, therefore, has responsibilities and obligations in order to promote a good or a service that will be used to the community’s well being.
First of all, it is important to point that one thing leads to another: the profit will come from the interest society has in the goods or services provided. That is to say that the organization’s primary interest is to serve the society somehow. Giant corporations, such as Coke and Google, provide something interesting to the people: in these cases, beverages or I.T. solutions. Therefore, even the greediest companys have to work in favour of the people they serve, beacause this is what will make it’s success.
Moreover, the organizations depend on human workers, who have needs. Studies have shown that better conditions workers find in the company, including benefits such as healthcare, dental care and profit’s participations, the more productive they become. These benefits have been shown to be a smart investment, and nowadays the giant companies, specially the technological ones, such as Apple, Microsoft and Google, are investing more and more on that. And since the workers are part os the society, that is also a way of serving the community.
To top it all, when organizations become sucessfull, they concentrate not only money, but also power. At this point, the government should be able to persuade these wealthy companies to increase the ammount of contribuition they have been giving to the community. That is part of the gonvernment responsibilities, in order to increase social equability. Also, consumers will soon be repulsed by the goods and services provide by greedy corporations, and may start looking for competitors with better enviromental and social consciesness.
In other words, in spite of the fact that the organizations need to create money in order to survive, it is needless to say that they do have responsibilities and obligations to the society, since they are built in a community that needs to be served.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, such as, first of all, in other words, in spite of, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26849315068 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33958555449 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523287671233 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4172249844 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.1875 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274370058481 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081078243996 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635793477705 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144895743036 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403593732448 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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