Society is governed by two types of laws, just and unjust. People must obey just laws but are at liberty to defy those laws which they determine are frivolous or unjust.
just laws are those which satisfies a society's major demands and unjust laws are those which do not. Both the laws are man made which may vary from one society to another and from time to time. obeying just laws and disobeying and resist unjust laws may hold water for a society but considering responsibility of every individual may not. The assertion could be agreed to some extent but not for every case. Firstly, just laws and unjust laws are totally man made for the well being of the society which is why they might not satisfy every individuals need. For example, driving within a certain speed is one of the widely accepted just laws of a society but for the individual who is in an emergency like taking a patient to the hospital or meeting an urgent client which may cause harm if not driven above that certain speed set by the society, disobeying that particular just law is what would save him. In this case, deviating the just law is valid. Secondly, disobeying and resisting the unjust law may cause detrimental effect to the society. For instance, disobeying traffic rules in the street is punished to control road accidents. if the breaking rules leading to punishment is completely resisted, then there would be no example of punishment which would lead the public to make more inclined to break traffic rules. this time an example of disobeying the just law is helping the society to set a norm to avoid unjust law. Finally, being respectful to others who may have a different lifestyle is a big responsibility for a society. For example, if someone smokes which may seem unjust for the individual who does not support smoking, but if he try to resist him from smoking, it may cause violence in the society.one can simply avoid resisting the one who is not obeying the just law to behave more responsible. In conclusion, obeying just laws and disobeying unjust laws may seem the right approach for a society but it certainly is not applicable for every case. The scenario must be considered to claim which approach is more responsible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... is punished to control road accidents. if the breaking rules leading to punishmen...
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Suggestion: tries
...who does not support smoking, but if he try to resist him from smoking, it may caus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72144846797 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57810842039 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448467966574 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.9163833152 60.3974514979 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388171580472 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175053082135 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139975258014 0.0758088955206 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388171580472 0.150359130593 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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