Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your

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Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

It is said that everyone is good at something. It could be sports, academics, or even cooking. Even if it seems that a person does not have a talent, they just could have not been born in the correct time period for it to be recognized. To illustrate, a child born in 2005 would be good at horse riding, but since he lives in the city and where horses are not really seen, it would be difficult to discover his or her talent. Nevertheless, it has been said that children who have talents should be trained in order to develop those talents. I mostly disagree with this statement for two reasons and agree with it for one reason.

Firstly, children’s talents could be beneficial to society at large and therefore should be developed in order to maximize that benefit. Talent that is not trained is wasted talent indeed. This is perciscly the reason why training and exhaustive practice is needed in order to maximize gain from a talent. Then, society can benefit. For one, a talented child who is good in art could practice painting in an art centered school and continue to study art in a university to expand his knowledge. Then, he could use his talents in order to enlighten society with his art and even revitalize its culture. In addition, a very intelligent girl who has say a 180 IQ should be trained in her ability by sending her to a special school where she is better able to optimize her talents as a super genius in order to use her intelligence to being society new scientific discoveries such as the mysteries of the physical explanations of the universe which was partially enlightened by other geniuses such as Einstien and Hawking. Both of these young prodigies need to practice as much as possible and as soon as possible in order to maximize their potential and thus benefit to others.

On the other hand, the talents of children may bring negligible benefit to society. Talents include both useful and not useful activities. Activities that are not useful to society should not be invested in by society. For example, a child who is good at magic tricks should not be developed since so many resources could be invested in just one specific entertainer which would not bring about much compelling change in society other than entertainment. Also, a child who is good a video games should not have his talents developed. Video games take a lot of skill and practice in order to be good at, however video games are seen as mostly a dilatory action rather than a useful talent. All in all, if a child is a good magician or a good video gamer, though it can impress a lot of people with the amount of skill that they have, should not be taken so seriously as because there is no real benefit to be gained from developing these kinds of talents. Resources could be devoted to things such as those who have even more useful talents as described above.

In addition, children should have some rights as to what they want to do with their time. Although a child could be the next Steve Jobs or Bill Gates, he or she should still have the right to do what he or she wants in their lives. If a child is a technological prodigy and wants to instead sell sodas, that child should be able to do so and not be infringed upon by the pressures of society telling them and forcing them what to do. It really boils down to basic rights and freedoms. Conversly, if a child agrees that technology is their passion and that they want to show the world their skill, then they could allow society to help them also if they desire help and are ok with having help along the way. Society could insist on helping and reminding from time to time that there is help available, but if the child doesn’t want help, then they should not be forced with help.

In conclusion, this is a complex issue in which no one extreme stance should be taken. There are instances where socity should and should not help develop talents of young children.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 396, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...entertainer which would not bring about much compelling change in society other than...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 45.0 19.5258426966 230% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 31.0 12.4196629213 250% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 33.0505617978 185% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 58.6224719101 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3240.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 712.0 442.535393258 161% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55056179775 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.16559078211 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48179840393 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 215.323595506 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.412921348315 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1015.2 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.9401442747 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235676705412 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769433667801 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511595386905 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151772692749 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228474636389 0.0667264976115 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.8420337079 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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