Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
According to Darwin's theory of evolution , no matter how much we try as time passes we are bound to get extinct. Extinction is the part of evolution, species compete for resources and the one which inures the process becomes the new evolved species. But, we as human are by far the most intelligent beings on the planet and can make effort to save them. Extinction of any species whether significant or minute affects the food chain in negative way, being able to realize that we should save the endangered species irrespective of human activities.
Influence that we - the homo sapiens have on the organisms is very subtle. probability of not knowing about our impact on other organisms is very high. We have created cities and settlements by bulldozing the forests and the natural habitats. We can't possibly have inkling about the these impacts. The bengal tiger has recently joined the list of endangered species, the result of lack of attention towards the issue. In Ranthambore animals like tiger are attacking pastoral's herds for food. As a result the humans are also getting attacked by tigers . Due to rapid urbanization, endangered animals like these have grown to be inimical. Initially the cattle herds have been a integral part of the forest ecosystem, but due to disturbance caused by taming the herds it is becoming unbearable for the people leaving near the forest area. Ultimately, we may or may not intentionally perform activities harming the endangered species , but any modification in the environment has consequences that we have to bear, so we must take actions to prevent the species from getting extinct.
No formal criteria is there to measure the impact that we have on other species's life. Extinction is caused by negligence and it is egregious for us as it stymie's the food chain. The whale commonly being hunted for their creating medicines which are assumed to improve health and immunity. But, can we incur the cost of extinction of the most playful water species. We can stop the killing and hunting but the loss which the water ecosystem has suffered from can't be recovered. Therefore, without assesing the proper cause of damage we can't reach to conclusion of protecting only those species which we think that we have damaged.
During difficult times as depicted in movies like 2012, end of the world or dooms day , we can't be deciding which species should survive and which should die. Every species deserves a chance to survive. Conseqently, we human have done terrible thing to the nature which has been nothing but kind to us. From ozone degradation to extinction we humans have contributed , therefore we can run from the fact by acting evasively but ultimately, it will come back to haunt us in future.
Although, sometimes it is beneficial to leave the nature to evolve on its own and lead to the creation of advanced species, but we won't be able to observe that kind of change so we can't know , which implies that we should take full responsibility to protect whatever number of these endangered species are extant.
In conclusion, Protecting endangered species is a responsibility that the nature has endowed upon us by granting our species with cerebral cortex.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2684.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97959183673 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72149586371 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 275.0 215.323595506 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510204081633 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 855.0 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3326003837 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.230769231 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7307692308 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233218662618 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677623775421 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764601742219 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145476949602 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786559042939 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.