Society should make efforts to save endangered species only if the potential extinction of those species is the result of human activities.
Earth being a planet consisting of various species, but the most dominated species are Human. Human for 1000 of years have lived upon on Earth and have alerted conditions on Earth through their activities. Likewise, humans have created certain conditions in which various species are unable to survive. Society need to behave with caution, as their activities affect other living things on planet Earth.
Society being a place with different people of different personalities living together, should evaluate their action as they might harm others. For instance, humans have constantly affected the green environment, that are home to many species and which provides the basic need for most of the living beings that is oxygen. Constant deforestation has hampered the living conditions of different species, for example
, the Bengal Tiger of India is on the verge of extinction due to deforestation and poaching by hunters. If not taken care, this species would get extinct. To control for this species from being extinct, a collective effort needs to be taken, wherein the deforestation rate should be reduced to zero and plant more trees instead.
Similar such actions that have lately affected the living conditions are the chemicals, waste and garbage dumped into water bodies. Industrial waste consists of various types of chemicals that are released into water bodies affect the marine lives. Marine species either die or contain high volume of chemicals in their body that eventually gets consumed by the society. The increasing rate of waste and garbage creation especially plastic waste, which is an alarming situation, has caused the marine species consume the plastic and ultimately die. Sometime before I read a news, where a whale was washed away at the shore, it had swallowed a kilogram of plastic, which eventually caused its dead.
Thirdly, various other reason for extinction of animals on Earth is the extensive demand of various body parts of various species. Species like elephants and rhinoceros are been hunted down to acquire their horns, animals been killed for making clothes, bags, etc. out of their skin. These things are sold at a higher cost in various market and have a great demand in various parts of different countries. Animals are been killed by the people who have paucity of food, various tribesmen living in forest area, have been living on killing animals. Some people have been purposely burning forest areas, to acquire land for farming purposes.
Society has constantly been alerting the environment around it for their own selfish needs, this has impacted a lot of species living on Earth. Various measures need to be taken, for example, reduce or rather stop deforestation, poaching or hunting of animals, dumping waste and garbage into water bodies, releasing chemicals, etc. Society needs to think gravely on the alarming conditions that are rising continuously, being living in a community, society needs to balance the food chain, so that every specie lives a better life. It needs to take measures to prevent other species from extinction and try to preserve the species that are on the verge of extinction, it needs to behave wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 416, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, likewise, so, third, thirdly, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2685.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21359223301 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54380157968 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500970873786 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 830.7 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3463922631 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4583333333 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180527666035 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596810218558 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547724393894 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106068325409 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512736927962 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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