Upto what extent shall we try to save Endangered species ? Which of the endangered species shall be our top priority? How much shall we invest in this salvation? are some of the important question of this century. Due to human intervention, many of the ecosystems are already fragile and if proper measure is not taken on time, they are likely to fall apart completely. The presented argument asserts that we should only try to save those endangered species which are on the verge of extinction as a result of human activity. I mostly disagree with the claim and reason pertaining my view are presented below.
First of all , human is most intelligent animal on the earth yet is too self-obsessed that in pursuit of his own betterment that he has harmed mother nature to a great extent. Due to industrialization , last century has witnessed tremendous deforestation so as to acquire land to build cities and roads. These newly constructed factories in turn had caused increase in various pollution such as air pollution due to gases emitted from production, water pollution due to deleterious waste from factory and so on. This all proved harmful to many animals as they either lost their habitat due to excess forest cutting or were exposed to pernicious chemical substances. Ultimately causing extinction of species . For example, due to industrialization in China, lot of forests were cut down, this caused Pandas to lost their natural habitat. Pandas had to move to human occupied cities in search of their food. This inability to find food and absence of their natural habitat declined Panda's number to such a great extent that once abundant in every forest in China are now countable.
Second, man's greed has as well caused extinction of many species. For example, Indian Tigers were very abundant in Tropical forests of India. However, due to excess poaching of tigers in order to get their skin and teeth - which has great value in International market, their number has plummet. Not only terrestrial but aquatic animals have also suffered from human's selfishness. Once one of the most diverse and abundant ecosystem of marine animals now suffer from imbalance and extinction of many species.
However, we human now have started to understand the important of balance of ecosystem. Many governments as well as many International Institutes like UNESCO have started creating awareness about extinct species and have also imposed ban of poaching of those species which are on verge of extinction. Governments have created sanctuary for protection of fragile species. Hence, as we are capable of saving species from extinction which is mandatory for maintaining balance of our ecosystem, we should do every possible attempt to save each species.
However some people may argue that, we should not try to save those species which are not useful to ecosystem or are not facing extinction due to human activity. This statement indeed has some credit. As the law of nature says, Fittest Survive, extinction of species may be just example of this law. Or one can argues extinction of a species say, for example, dinosaur is least likely to affect whole ecosystem. To conclude, if it is feasible and not costing fortune of money, every action should be taken to save each species because we human do posses advance technology that can save that species and more efforts shall be put forward for salvation if extinction is caused by human intervention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, well, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 31.0 12.9106741573 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2887.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 571.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05604203152 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88831323574 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75657653489 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485113835377 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 926.1 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.1523037238 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5517241379 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6896551724 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03448275862 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22209557025 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647537394891 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729298098176 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139449382512 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792294346863 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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