Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.
The assertion that the young people should be prepared for leadership in government,industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not by competition is what i merely found ambiguous, as for being leader in the society there should be some favorable competition which provides some victory and losing side getting the leader from the losing side to be more effective in providing leadership to te welfare for the people next time when the election comes up.
There are several due reason by which I disagree with the assertion because if there are no competition in a particular field the individual is not able to grow its skills in a particular manner. For example the leadership in governing the country is the most challenging part of the country. To do so a person has to control the entire country by which all the rules and regulations are under control by that party. The young people in the country are influenced by the great leaders which are pastly organising the country's part due to which the effect on the young people are measured. This the leaders show some of the great competitors which are efficiently working with the healthy comeptition, by this the individual i.e. young people gets encouraged and comes up with defeating the comeptition which helps them to be provifing a great leadership.
Other reason which can be converted to the most efficient leadership is by providing the healthy relationship with the people surroundings them. By doing so young people are able to encouraged and helped themselves to get better day by day. For example The competition in the industries also play a major role in the effective leadership. Hence by showing them the great influencers, the many among some of the industrialists leaders which has shown there great leadership in the country has been efficient by the competition against them. So providing some knowledge to the young people about great industrialist leaders they can be encouraged and can be the most effective by their means in providing leadership.
Another way to say that the assertion is ambiguous, I might feel equivocal about the author in the assertion provided. I though disagree about the reason i provided above, i also agree with the assertion. The young people can be better leader by instilling them with a a sense of cooperation gives a reason that it works sometimes like , for example The great leader mahatma gandhi who used to fight with british people with non violence and he had great skills to encouraged people when there were no competition against him. He used to unit the people from the different areas and protest against the british people. Thereby this shows greeat cooperation of the leader which can be instilled to the young people by providing them knowledge of the cooperation can also help find its way.
Hence the conclusion can be made that their can either of the two ways which can get the young people to be a leader in any field of whichever a individual want. But the assertion has a contradictory statements which can be asserted as that if the leadership knowledge is gained by the competition can get the young generation to be a better leader.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, as for, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 80.0 58.6224719101 136% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2667.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 545.0 442.535393258 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89357798165 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84056487091 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.381651376147 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 824.4 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.8751423735 60.3974514979 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.166666667 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2777777778 23.4991977007 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296904018171 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10676781155 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885428792314 0.0758088955206 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20951621246 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492150643873 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 14.1392134831 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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