Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Do the college students consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study? Or should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field? The prompt suggest two statements. I do believe that the students should consider their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study for the following reasons.
First of all, the job market is ever shifting, the current job market may or may not remain in the future. For the supporting example, during 1960s, the nuclear Engineers were high in demand since the countries were in competition with each other to establish their nuclear power plants and nuclear weapons. However, the job market for nuclear Engineers is considerable declined in 2000s. Due to this, many Engineers were remained unemployed. So for this reason, considering the availability of jobs, if they base their choice of a field of study, it would be devastating for them.
Second of all, if the students choose the field in which they are interested in, they can establish their own company on their field rather seeking for a job. For example, Elon musk has told in an interview that, once he was seeking for a job in a internet sector, however, the internet based jobs were very few in 90s. Since he couldn't find the jobs in internet sector in which he was very keen at that movement, he established a company. Later, he became successful. One the other hand, it is not rational to say that all the students seek for a job, maybe they want to establish their company. So, students should consider their talents and interests when choosing a field of study.
Third of all, some people may argue that students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. I strongly disagree with this statement. For example, in recent time, the IT sector has huge amount of jobs available, if everyone base their choice on the presence of jobs, it is no sure that this condition will remain constant after ten years. It is possible that may be after ten years the entire job market shifted towards other field. If so, what all these students will do after that? If they choose the field in which they are interested in, in such case they would even establish a company and diversify that.
In conclusion, I strongly support the first viewpoints for the above reasons. Hence, the college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study, and should not base their base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: during the 1960s
...the future. For the supporting example, during 1960s, the nuclear Engineers were high in dem...
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... since the countries were in competition with each other to establish their nucle...
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... the job market for nuclear Engineers is considerable declined in 2000s. Due to t...
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...ear Engineers is considerable declined in 2000s. Due to this, many Engineers were remai...
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... that, once he was seeking for a job in a internet sector, however, the internet ...
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...ever, the internet based jobs were very few in 90s. Since he couldnt find the jobs in ...
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...sed jobs were very few in 90s. Since he couldnt find the jobs in internet sector in whi...
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...statement. For example, in recent time, the IT sector has huge amount of jobs availabl...
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...r choice on the presence of jobs, it is no sure that this condition will remain co...
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... and diversify that. In conclusion, I strongly support the first viewpoints ...
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Suggestion: base their
...oosing a field of study, and should not base their base their choice of a field of study on the avail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, second, so, third, as to, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73846153846 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4771736566 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.397802197802 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8800404382 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7391304348 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26086956522 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.565400780054 0.243740707755 232% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198351307162 0.0831039109588 239% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240178920116 0.0758088955206 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.421360724801 0.150359130593 280% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.241144157933 0.0667264976115 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 8.38706741573 80% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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