Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate.
Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Undoubtedly the development of every society depends on the operation of many different corporations inside it. Today corporations have various duties, and some contend that aside from profit making they should also pay attention to their social responsibilities, while others claim that the only duty of corporations is to operate within legal restrictions and focus on their money making procedure. In my opinion most of the corporations have social responsibilities that are bound to do in order to keep their place among rivals.
Depending on their scope of operations, corporations can contribute differently to their society and environment. The social responsibility ensures the natural environment, ecosystem, animals and even humans to survive. Paying attention to the environment not only provides people with healthful status but also brings revenues for the corporation in the long run. Factories which depend on natural resources can guarantee their resource achievement by opting for safe environmental behaviors among their competitors. Additionally, corporations must participate in cultural preservation, in order to promote theirs place among the people of societies. Performing cultural and humanistic behavior by chief corporations in a society has numerous advantages for the citizens, in fact they can promote chief humanistic principles among people and participate in nurturing the young generation, which bring benefits for the country as a whole.
Having said that, profit making is undeniably the main purpose of every corporation. In order to keep the employment rate high in a society, corporation should inevitably engage in competitions in order to ensure their survival among their rivals. Furthermore, the development of every society depends on its corporations. Constructing the city infrastructures such as hospitals, schools,recreational centers depends on a corporation to obtain more and more money in order to survive.Therefore, depending on their scope of operations the corporations they can limit their social concerns and concentrate on their professional concerns.
In conclusion, although many corporations can not evade from their significant social responsibilities with regards to their scope of operations and duties, some other need to focus on their process of making more revenues in order to provide welfare in the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ery society depends on the operation of many different corporations inside it. Today corporati...
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Suggestion: , recreational
...frastructures such as hospitals, schools,recreational centers depends on a corporation to obt...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...more and more money in order to survive.Therefore, depending on their scope of operations...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r professional concerns. In conclusion, although many corporations can not evade...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2033.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80857142857 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44380544142 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508571428571 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.485334291 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.214285714 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.21951772744 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220883970857 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858499222903 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438221883153 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151959619683 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494484924929 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 48.8420337079 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.1639044944 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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