Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the
societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of
corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you
should address both of the views presented
The contrasting viewpoints of the people on the corporations as presented in the above statement regarding their operation in the society primary are different lookouts based on morality as well as practicality . I certainly do agree with the former opinion that the corporations have a responsibilty to promote the well-being of the societies and the environment in which they operate as the other view that they are primarily meant to churn out money as much as they want whithin the umbrella of the law seems quite radical and selfish in its own context despite of being relatively practical opinion considering the volatile nature of the market where everybody seems to snatch one another's bread . As these corporations do utilise the resources of the societythey owe a certain accountability and responsiblity towards society . Moreover, the counter opinion that blames the corporations has stemmed from the opinions of the people who align themselves with anti communists sentiments and do particularly view these corporations as a baggage on the society thus ignoring the very prospect of providing bread and butter to the people of society.Also,both the views are outrightly in contrast with one another as the former opinion hopes the same attribute that should be characteristic in corporations whereas the latter one indirectly refutes the same .
Regarding the former opinion that believes the corporations are responsible for utilizing the resources of the society seems quite complacent on the moral grounds.As is a evident that corporationscertainly do use the resources and at the same time also detoriate the environment by polluting its various aspects.So it is conspicous for one to feel the corporation's accountability to the society and its responsibility to maintian a healthy environment for the society to live in .For example,the philanthropic activity done by the founder of Microsoft Corp. in providing vaccinations to the impoverished population in south africa thus guarding them from various deadly diseases is a commendable work which the former opinion advocates .Such activites should be encouraged as these activities do help in holding up the standard of the world society as a whole by incentivising a certain part of the society.
Regarding the other opinion which straightforwardly condemns the corporations for making more and more money do certainly ignores this philanthropic aspect of these corporations . This lookout has stemmed though indirectly from the suffering of the society in terms of imbalance of economic wealth whithin the population who believe that this wealth is a shared heritage of the humanity and cunninly play a blame game as a daily chore .
With this analysis,As I have previously stated that the former opinion stands firm on the moral grounds but at the same time the latter one stands tall in terms of practicality considering the cut throught competition in the market and adequate volatility in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2521.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40987124464 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28838403307 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472103004292 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 813.6 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.854602552 60.3974514979 250% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.111111111 118.986275619 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.7777777778 23.4991977007 220% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 5.21951772744 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211514380112 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833072072802 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634456246741 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101176544066 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765186903301 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.9 14.1392134831 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 48.8420337079 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.1743820225 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.99 12.1639044944 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.