Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
In the capitalism society we live in today, corporations are established with a view to generating profit. However, whether these large firms also have a responsibility to promote the well-being of society and sustain environments remains a topic of debate. As far as I'm concerned, since corporations need to be responsible to their stakeholders, they also have a responsibility to make as much money as possible, given that they operate within the law. On the other hand, although it is not their duty to promote the well-being of society and the environment they operate in, they often still do so since current laws and public opinion help align these actions with their goals to generate profit.
Given the funding process of corporations, it is undeniable that the major focus and responsibility for corporations should be making as much money as possible. For corporations that went through IPOs, the funding of the firm comes from investments of the stakeholders. Therefore, firms must operate effectively and strive to increase the value of their stock to be responsible for their investors.
Although it is not the corporations' duty to promote the well-being of society and help preserve the environments, current laws and public opinion still require the corporations to do. Take environmental laws as an example. With a view to creating a sustainable environment for our offsprings and allow future corporations to thrive, governments often fine corporations if they don't abide by environmental laws. Governments may also provide subsidizes for companies that are aimed to operate in an eco-friendly way. Hence, corporations still have incentives to preserve environments.
Aside from environmental laws, the general public also expect corporations to promote the well-being of society. Hence, given the pressure to impress the public and establish a friendly brand name, corporations often lay down policies that might benefit society as a whole. For example, corporations might provide positions for mentally-disadvantaged people to apply and establish a benign workplace for the physically-disabled. Furthermore, corporations might also take part in fundraising events and donate hospitals and schools to poorer countries.
In conclusion, the major responsibility for corporations is to generate as much profit as possible given the nature of their funding process. However, corporations would also promote the well-being of society and environment even if it is not their responsibility, since these actions might align with their goal to make money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54314720812 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41484422352 2.79657885939 122% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451776649746 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1502278753 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.333333333 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391325303057 0.243740707755 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130733625671 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081554325016 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23155121775 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983965282996 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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