Corporation responsibility is an interesting and complex topic. Traditionally, a corporation's main objective revolves around fiscal gain. However, the environment and well-being of society is a shared responsibility. Actions of a corporations have the potential to affect many, both positively and negatively.Therefore corporations should indeed participate to some extent in the protection and promotion of the society and environment in which they function. Moreover, this concept should be seriously considered when determining the rules and regulations under with a corporation legally operates.
Protecting the environment is a shared responsibility. All members of a society affect their surroundings to some extent and corporations are no exception. It should be in a corporation's best interest to minimize their effect on the environment. Large companies in the oil industry, such as BP, have historically had a dramatic and negative effect on their surroundings. Oil spills into the ocean critically damaged natural aquatic habitats and continue to have a lasting
effect. It can be argued that without regulation, corporations will continue to objectively take advantage of their surroundings in order to promote the highest financial gain. In other words, considering the potential impact, corporations should legally be held accountable for their actions.
Building on this concept, corporations clearly have the means to have an enormous impact on society, both good and bad. When applied properly, corporate resources can yield dramatic improvements on any issue. The Bill Gates estate is now known for research into malaria. The implications and results of their research are immense and have changed the lives of many at risk individuals. Along with functioning inside the restrictions in place by the government, there should be a means of government regulated incentive for those who similarly chose to promote the well-being of society.
Admittedly, soley functioning inside the laws and restrictions may have little dramatic effect on society and environment. Corporations are left alone to focus on what is most important to them - money. Nevertheless, it can be argued that having no negative impact is a positive thing in itself. Having no carbon footprint is desirable. Additionally, it should not be overlooked that a successful and financially sound corporation offers jobs and economic advantages to the society in which they function. In summation, if the proper laws are in place, compliant corporations by default will promote growth and protection of society and the environment.
Conclusively, actions of corporations have the potential to impact the society and environment in which they function both positively and negatively. Laws and regulations should be constructed to ensure these negative effects are minimized, and positive effects are promoted and incentivised. Functioning within these rules will allow both corporations to make as much money as possible while offering significant advantages to those around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a corporation' or simply 'corporations'?
Suggestion: a corporation; corporations
... is a shared responsibility. Actions of a corporations have the potential to affect many, both...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ct many, both positively and negatively.Therefore corporations should indeed participate ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ct many, both positively and negatively.Therefore corporations should indeed participate ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'corporations the best'.
Suggestion: corporations the best
...ons are no exception. It should be in a corporations best interest to minimize their effect on th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tection of society and the environment. Conclusively, actions of corporations ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2617.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73903508772 5.05705443957 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37547903577 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495614035088 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 832.5 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2353927037 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.653846154 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260704713555 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752417406703 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525547871152 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148069761513 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591576548982 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.1639044944 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 100.480337079 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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