Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Humans have been living on earth for thousands of years and the extend to which we have exploited earth is staggering. Day in , day out we use nature for our benefit, it's high time we gave nature the care it deserves. The prompt puts forward a disagrement between two opposing views and I would like to agree with the former that corporations do need to promote the well being of the society and environment, explaining via three points.
Governments all around the globe have taken huge steps into minimising the damage done by these corporations on the enviornment and health conditions of the people, for instance, the introduction of policies like CSR, which require the corporations to pay a certain portion of their profits in order to do good for the society. This has made corporations indirectly, although reluctantly help the society.
Although the government provide schemes and restrictions on the amount of polutants these industries produce, industries often find ways to go around them and somehow make their production better and earn profit at the expence of distroying the nature. For example the case of Yamuna river in northern India, although one of the famous rivers of the country, it showcases an abundance of polutants, because of the ignorance of corporate industries.Corporations being powerful in terms of wealth, should in fact help out the government in making sure that society is helped, and reduce the amount of waste they excrete.
Tragedies are a common site when corporations try to ooze out every penny they can, while caring as little as possible for the enviornment, take for example the Bhopal gas tragedy, that cost thousands of deaths and millions of people to suffer, generations of malfuctioning in their bodies and loss of dear ones, all because of the negligance of a chemical factory. This example states the importance why corporations should be more concerned about the well being of the society.
One can argue that corporations are trying to ease the problems of the society by providing with them goods and services people need and so the corporations need not do more, but isn't that precicely the point? Helping people?, If helping the society is the ultimate goal, then coporations must look into themselves, evaluate and come out with a better aproach to make money for themselves, but not at the expence of the society they are trying to serve.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ve exploited earth is staggering. Day in , day out we use nature for our benefit,...
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...h is staggering. Day in , day out we use nature for our benefit, its high time we...
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Suggestion: Corporations
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Suggestion:
...ices people need and so the corporations need not do more, but isnt that precicel...
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Suggestion: isn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2014.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.035 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89586428163 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5575 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.906306268 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 183.090909091 118.986275619 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3636363636 23.4991977007 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214218683907 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822064631433 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398881489928 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117900016321 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197072638805 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 14.1392134831 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.8420337079 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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