The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Freedom embraces creativity, fosters intelligence and spreads happiness. The prompt recommends that the well being of a society is enhanced when the people in it question it's authority, and I strongly agree with this recommendation. Below are the three major reasons to support this recommendation.
More than 90 percent of the countries in the world right now are democracies in one form or the other, meaning the people in these countries have the right to elect, question and overthrow a government. Take for instance, worlds largest superpower, United States of America, home for the pinacle of technology, art, fashion, you name it. Clearly if almost all of the countries are converting to a democracy, it must mean something. People in a free country can express their views, not only that, they can be assured that their view point will be heard and adequate action will be taken, hence these countries tend to prosper.
Almost a centuary ago there were many communist countries, threatening the effectiveness of democracy, but as anyone can see the trend is shifting towards democracy. Although the number of communist countries is significantly low, it is intresting to note that on an average democratic countries are far more prosperous than communuist ones, with an exception of some countries like China. take for example the state of North korea, wherin a slight criticism for it's monarch can result in death penaly, even public execution. Even the economy growth rate for democratic countries is significantly higher, Take for example India, one of the fasrtest growing economies in the world, was a poor country half a centuary ago, entangled in a web of colonialism and monarchy. This shows that when a country is set free and the people in it can question authority freely, there is absolute surity that it will grow, and if you let a country suffer in the hands of a cruel regime, the consquences are evident as in the case of North korea.
Taking a look at history, we can observe how monarchs have destroyed countries they ruled, using people as slaves, using the whole country as their private property, performing any maniac deeds they wish to do without being questioned, The example lies in the plathora of monarchs in India in the 1700s, who ruled for decades, for their own benifit, caring verry little, if any for the people. this shows how an abuse of power can be achieved if not kept in check.
One can argue that monarchs/ communists do belive in freedom and are made in efforts to imrpove the lives of people in them, well although on paper a communist coyuntry may look good, but the reality is what we are witnessing now, the shift towards a free nation, where everyone has a right to express and where everyone can question the ruling of authority.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the largest'.
Suggestion: worlds the largest
...rthrow a government. Take for instance, worlds largest superpower, United States of America, h...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...fashion, you name it. Clearly if almost all of the countries are converting to a democracy...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'country'?
Suggestion: country
...g to note that on an average democratic countries are far more prosperous than communuist...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Take
...exception of some countries like China. take for example the state of North korea, w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ng verry little, if any for the people. this shows how an abuse of power can be achi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2324.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9133192389 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72026731922 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 720.0 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2848551608 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.933333333 118.986275619 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5333333333 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169608206471 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619248944796 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669378551027 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099703266331 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487266618221 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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