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Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

One portion of the prompt urges that the sole responsibility of a corporation is to promote the well-being of the societies while the other one states that there sole aim is to make as much money as possible. For some obvious reasons I would like to be "mostly agree" with the former statement and therefore obliged to provide necessary viewpoints in defense of my position.

The corporations, irrespective of private and public or autonomous, have to work for the betterment of something otherwise they will not be allowed to run on by the authority. Now, the aim of these corporation depends on varities of sectors. For example - there are some corporations which conducts in clothings and cosmetics, there are some which solely based on food supply and beverages, also there are some which work on the contemporary needs of the then people. Whatever the aim of a corporation will be, it should be come from the contribution to the society. There will be hardly any corporation which can flout their novel aim and work only to earn money rapaciously. This is not possible for any corporations as all the legitimate corporations are under a certain authority of their respective places or the under the supervision of government. Even though the corporation succeeded in establishing their business still they will languish in the long run if they do not provide necessary outcome the public wants from it. They might profit by earning huge amount of money from people, although working under the law, but they will lag behind other corporations when the ephimeral attraction is gone.

For example - two corporations, working under the same category and same allotted hours - one of the them is quite enthusistic in helping the simple people out of love and passion. Whereas the other one is happy enough to earn as much profits and gains it can do, obviously not by flouting the laws. Both of these companies might seem to do just the right thing, even though the foremer one is better to get more response then the latter one. It is because the foremer one will gain the trust and affection of people. People will start to believe in their efforts and their products. The earlier corporation might even face much less monetary outcome or priviledges pereviously, but in the long run they are in more comfortable position to extend in the future. On the other hand, the latter one might be able to work out just professionally, without much effort to impress its customers and capricious about their demand might not do well in the future evemn though they are not harming any laws, working suitable within it. But just to provide only necessities will only help them to grow; the must one virtue for a corporation to maintain its existance - can be seen in the culture of the earlier mentioned corporation.

Counter-view can be that - there is nothing wrong in professionally working and earning as much money as possible, obviously remain under the laws. It is well observed view, however, lacks foresight. The thing is that - the extension and the growth of a corporation comes from the response of the people. And people will demand "better". The betterment can be of anything, in good behaviour, good aims, good works, voluntery works and so on. When a corporation provides them with so much altruistic and socially appreciated works they tend to trust those corporations and remain biased to them by which the corporation can earn the belief of those people, helping them only to extend themselves in the long run. Whereas, the hard and fast rules adapted one does soonly becomes obsoleted because of the high competition caused by the mentioned coporations and as a result they might not be able to earn as much money as they would have earned earlier. So, grwoth and continuous developement of a corporation is impeded when it bounds itself only to earning money rapaciously, although remaining under the boundaries of laws - cultivating them to perish in the long run.

So, looking at all the viewpoints and factors mentioned althrough the essay, the aim to only earn money, even though remaining under the boundaries of law - might not help any coporations, specially when the contemporary corporations are much more devoted in doing social works and developemental projects - as it will obstruct its growth to flourish, resulting to be a deadlock corporation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this corporation' or 'these corporations'?
Suggestion: this corporation; these corporations
...un on by the authority. Now, the aim of these corporation depends on varities of sectors. For exa...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'?
Suggestion: come
... of a corporation will be, it should be come from the contribution to the society. T...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'them'?
Suggestion: the; them
...tegory and same allotted hours - one of the them is quite enthusistic in helping the sim...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...he other one is happy enough to earn as much profits and gains it can do, obviously ...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...emer one is better to get more response then the latter one. It is because the forem...
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Line 7, column 780, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'become'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: become
... and fast rules adapted one does soonly becomes obsoleted because of the high competiti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 12.4196629213 217% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 100.0 58.6224719101 171% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3662.0 2235.4752809 164% => OK
No of words: 734.0 442.535393258 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98910081744 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.20503932437 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88976292037 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 313.0 215.323595506 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426430517711 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1135.8 704.065955056 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.2812723868 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.62962963 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1851851852 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291327631504 0.243740707755 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831989322652 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503636831057 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167775760947 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061193119945 0.0667264976115 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 161.0 100.480337079 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments