Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much
money as possible.
Big Corporations are even bigger that some nation, with this huge money making there comes a social obligation too. One part of the prompt argues, corporations have a social responisbility to promote well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. I completely agree with this statement.
In some cases, there should be maintained a distance between corporate sector and society. For instance, a company like Book-Face.com which is completely dependent on targeted advertisement of customers should not interfere much with the society. They exploit human emotion to show advertisement and persuade people to do or buy something. As we can see, by interfering they will do more bad than good.
On the other hand, corporations which are not directly related to human emotion exploitation should make efforts to ameliorate the condition of society and environment. Take Tesla motors, for example. Unlike other automakers there cars are completely electric and thus zero emissions. This leads to betterment of environmental conditions.
Furthermore, they should be doing service to society and environment without even saying, as they are the one who are exploiting the human society (human resource) and nature. For example, private rocket companies such as Blue Origin and SpaceX are achieving remarkable feet of engineering only because of people who are persistently for them. Also, one rocket launch releases a huge amount of green house and other toxic gases. It should be taken in consideration that how much they are harming the nature by launching just a single rocket in the sky.
In conclusion, there can be the cases where private entity should not interfere in societal and environmental issues but in majority of cases it should be the duty of those corporations to ameliorate the condition of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 290.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3275862069 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01427637568 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.9145374064 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248095968582 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758487193671 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765868343673 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135032577291 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562058017548 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.