A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.
Students are the future of a nation and should be guided towards a bright future of their own choice. The prompt recommends that In a nation, Students should study the same curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I loosely disagree with the suggestion and argue that this is a relative matter and varies from case to case by three reasons.
In some cases, this is a valid argument and should be followed. For instance, take developing countries. A developing country which has recently got it's freedom from foreign powers has obligation to build and strengthen it's economy should go for it. It is because the current goal of the country is to sustain itself with a steady workforce and cannot afford to have variations spread across unecessary fields. For example, a country may not require a fashion designer just after it's independent. The above example illustrates a case in which a country can mandate a national curriculum for all it's students.
However, every student is different and requires different attention. Thus, it is possible, that nation is suppressing it's talents. For instance, a newly born nation may require different set of hands which are able to handle different aspects of the country e.g. leaders, sportsman, buisnessman. Plenty of students are interested in these from the middle school or so. So, it is clear that every individual is different and desires different thing in life and a nation should fully support in that.
Furthermore, it may be possible that all the provinces have different history and circumstances. Thus it may not be possible to do so.
In conclusion, this suggestion is seems not advisable for a complete nation. But there are exceptions to this and sometimes it can be followed but other times it is essential that nation should not force students to study same curriculum.
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...ional curriculum for all its students. However, every student is different and ...
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...a nation should fully support in that. Furthermore, it may be possible that all...
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...ve different history and circumstances. Thus it may not be possible to do so. ...
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...ry and circumstances. Thus it may not be possible to do so. In conclusio...
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...us it may not be possible to do so. In conclusion, this suggestion is seems ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, e.g., furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 307.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00977198697 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78364253602 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534201954397 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0860186211 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.21951772744 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365537797211 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114817661878 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102673759109 0.0758088955206 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19228641612 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088864695574 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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