Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible. [Specific Task Instruction: Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
It is asserted by some group that the only responsponsility of corporations, provided they operate within the law is to make much money as possible. However, the other group believe that cooperation has a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate can be much agreed with. This is so because corporation within a society has a way of uniting people, thereby, bringing promotion to the society as a whole not only in terms of money but environmental peace, harmony, and money can all be achieved.
First, corporation promotes the well-being of the society in the sense that, it is formed by unity of minds. Corporation is seen in a society that is united and unity among people would definitely open there minds to the needs of the society not self-centered attitudes. From what we see in a Nation, growth cann't be see accept corporation amidst the leaders and also the society. Unity among Nations also help boost the well-being of the world, because peace of mind is garanteed. So, therefore, corporations responsibilty in view of this is to engender peace, harmony, and salubrious environment.
Another responsibility of corporation that has to be looked out for is the promotion to the society environment. Promotion could be in terms of economic status, it is a society that is united that sees the needs of its society and then desires a way out. To bolster the society people with the skills in marketing, agriculture, engineering, can all go headlong to see areas they can invest in not just for the present but for the future as well. If there is a requirement to collaborate witrh outside society, probably for excahnge of one resource with another, corporation within spring corporation outside without by-cut.
Conclusively, a society where corporation can be found, no doubt peaceful environment, booming economic system, stable growth is guaranteed. Although, the law is also need ed to manage excesses of human but stating that money is the only possible outcome of corporation is limited and therfore, cannot be agreed to.
In conclusion, the assertation by some group that the only responsponsility of corporations, provided they operate within the law is to make much money as possible cannot be agreed on based on the above stated responsibilties of corporation in a society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...s guaranteed. Although, the law is also need ed to manage excesses of human but stat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13220718424 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459948320413 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2580885179 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445316990746 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154309044238 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106019482532 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254258671294 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117560762598 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 168, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...s guaranteed. Although, the law is also need ed to manage excesses of human but stat...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07751937984 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13220718424 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459948320413 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 640.8 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2580885179 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445316990746 0.243740707755 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154309044238 0.0831039109588 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106019482532 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254258671294 0.150359130593 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117560762598 0.0667264976115 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.