Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being
of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only
responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much
money as possible.
Government of a country can not alone operate the whole country and that is why corporations are created to look after the partial portion of any city. The people who works in city corporations are also the representatives of government of that country. The city corporations people have some power since they are looking after the welfare of the people of that area of that city. The prompt states that the general view of the local people considering the image of the city corporations is not same, some have positive views of people who are working in the city corporations whereas, some belive that city corporations is working under corruption. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this statement that both of the views of general people exists because of the following two reasons.
Firstly, a country is divided into different state, divisions, districts, city corporations based on the volume of the locality and population of that country. Government alone can't do the development of the whole country. And here comes the responsibilities of city corporations. They do as the government want for the welfare of the people and always follow the constitutions of that country. For example, in a democratic country like Bangladesh, every divisions has two city corporation, and every city corporations has their elected mayor who is the representative of that city corporations. Dhaka has South and North city corporations. During winter season the prevalence of Dengue has increased in Dhaka as it is a tropical country and lots of people die every year. The North city corporation mayor will look after the condition where and how should this spreading of Dengue can be prevented. It is not possible for the Government to take care of each and every details of the people. Then the city corporations will work to solve the problems that troubles the people. So, this is the reason that people believe that corporations are responsible for the welfare and development of the people, socities and the respective environment.
Secondly, city corporations has the power to take some actions during emergency and sometimes they can misuse it. For instance, if the state government has alloted money for the improvement of the streets and roads of any locality and sent it to the city corporations. If corrupted mayor exists then he will try to somehow ignore the development of the road and won't use the whole amount of the alloted money for the constructions of new road. With the worst condition of the road people will suffer and sometimes it will be danger like taking lives by the damaged road. And this corrupted corporations are the representatives of growing people's belief of existing bad city corporation those who will only take money but won't do any development.
Some may argue that how can be corporations play both the positive and negative role. But this is true that there is always something bad behind every good things, and city corporations are not out of this. The ratio of the good and bad people may vary but there is always bad and good people in the society.
Finally, good deeds are getting noticed when there is also some evil workers who tries to lower the good works. But existence of both people help people's to make their own views and this is applicable for every field. There is people in the corporations who always thinks about the welfare of people and some also think about the reverse.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 382, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...f the people of that area of that city. The prompt states that the general view of ...
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Line 1, column 577, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...who are working in the city corporations whereas, some belive that city corporati...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ation of that country. Government alone cant do the development of the whole country...
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Line 2, column 478, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'corporation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'corporations'.
Suggestion: corporations
...angladesh, every divisions has two city corporation, and every city corporations has their ...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
... but wont do any development. Some may argue that how can be corporations play both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2850.0 2235.4752809 127% => OK
No of words: 580.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91379310345 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80891438104 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.391379310345 0.4932671777 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 917.1 704.065955056 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0099291485 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4814814815 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.74074074074 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217733480202 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677851630811 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566535531725 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127887587729 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410711186754 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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