Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of the corporations, provided they operate within law, is to make as much money as possible.
A sense of responsibility towards our surrounding is very important and much needed, especially in today’s world, where apathy is ruling everywhere and the moral degradation is increasing everyday hurting our beautiful world and its elements including people and environment. The prompt presents an argument regarding this- whether corporations should extend their responsibilities for the betterment of the society and the environment along with their own business interest or they should limit themselves to their own financial thoughts. I believe, as stated in the beginning, corporations being part of this world filled with needs and helps, should take part in the social welfare and contribute to save the environment.
When a business organization installs it production unit in an area, it creates multiple opportunities starting including various job opportunities and arousal of small business centering that facility. It is expected that the corporation would hire from the local competent youths rather than fetching workers from outside. This is not just expected, but also needed to solve the unemployment problem of that area and bring an increment to the local financial condition. For example, when the tobacco company BAT opened there plant in Kushtia, Bangladesh, it helped the local students join there immediately after their graduation. Being a rural area and agriculture being the major field of work, this opportunity helped those local students to learn more, get acquainted with the norms and cultures of a large multinational corporation, which would otherwise be impossible for them to get access to.
Furthermore, when a corporation needs to install their factory in a rural area where roads and other communication facilities are poor, instead of waiting for the government or other local authority to improve the situation they should come up with a solution such as to build roads and network towers. It will not only help their communication and production lead time, but also the local people will be benefitted. For instance, when Chevron decided to operate in a distant village of Sylhet, Bangladesh, on upon finding a new gas field, they take initiations to build a highway both for their production purpose and opened it for the use of all sorts of local people. It helped other farmers and local businessmen to bolster their communication and improve financially.
Lastly, taking care of the environment is almost mandatory for any corporation, not just to maintain compliance, but to save our mother nature. Many of the corporations these days have to use chemicals in their production process that are deadly for the environment. By law, they may maintain a certain level of toxicity they can emit to the open air or water, but it is their sole responsibility to ensure that amount is way below the allowed amount, in fact, as low as close to zero.
It is true, for a company to operate in a certain locality takes a lots of cost and financial problems, which they may like to overcome by putting their top priority towards benefit and moneymaking. But they should never forget their responsibilities towards mother-nature and the people living in it, as ultimately, in a damaged world where there will be no one safe and living healthily, who will be there customer?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, may, regarding, so, as to, for example, for instance, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 12.9106741573 225% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2783.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 534.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21161048689 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80712388197 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00035358678 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520599250936 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 875.7 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0873366335 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.705882353 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4117647059 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190730287897 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590225700087 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400653515157 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113861059565 0.150359130593 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374599976199 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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