Some people believe that corporations have the responsibility to promote the wellbeing of the societies and environments in which they operate, Others believe the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which views closely aligns with your own position, and explain your reason for the position taken. In developing and supporting your position, you should address the both views presented
The wellbeing of a society is important to human life which promotes it sustainability, so the duty of promoting the wellbeing of an environment is not a trivial issue as this could have favourable or adverse effect on a society. so the prompt recommends the beliefs of two views in respect to what a corporation duty should be but in my opinion I strongly agree with the view that a corporation have the duty to enhance the wellbeing of the societies in which they operate in for the following three cogent reasons;
To begin, If a corporation can provide solutions to problems facing a society they operate in for example providing portable water supply after a long time of battling with contaminated water supply in a society this would not only go a long way in preventing water borne diseases that could affect the people in the society which minority of which m be maybe their employees which makes them know their value and how the corporation they work with has their best interest of the people and them at heart which in return improve the corporation image.
Secondly, when some part of a corporation profits is been used to support non-profit organisations across the society they operate in, that depends mostly on individual donation it helps this organizations to reach out to more people and assist them with their needs and this philanthropic duty opens room to investors who would want to partner up with the corporation to do more and in return a lot of business opportunities may be established that would benefit the both parties in the nearest future.
Furthermore the view that a corporation responsibility is to make profits under the law holds water due to the fact that if profits are not made the corporation does not only go bankrupt but this would limit the corporation ability to give back to the society they operate in so profits from corporation is a major source that enables them carry out their social duty.
In conclusion some corporation use this responsibility for selfish gains to constantly improve just their image to get more attention from potential customers and investors to do business with them but without doubt it promotes the wellbeing of the society it operates in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87105263158 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83487750545 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492105263158 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 23.0359550562 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 220.30215614 60.3974514979 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.2 118.986275619 311% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.0 23.4991977007 323% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.2 5.21951772744 368% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377204986824 0.243740707755 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205920950354 0.0831039109588 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656815721616 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21409170442 0.150359130593 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513884153623 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 14.1392134831 279% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 48.8420337079 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 12.1743820225 270% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.15 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 11.2143820225 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 11.7820224719 280% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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