Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Engineering,medicine etc are noble professions but poetry,music,drama etc make the life more enjoyable. Poetry, music, drama, literature can be regarded as some form of art. The prompt discuss about the funding of art by the government where some people support the funding while others argue it threatens the intregity of the art. I believe that the government should fund the art but it should not be commercialized to the degree that it looses its authenticity.
It is generally the case that the funding for the art sector in a country is less. But the floursihment of art helps the country to be recognized in the whole world. For example, one of the greatest artist of Italy is Leodarno Da Vinci, he put Italy on the map of the world . Similarly in the case of Nepal, Araniko, one of the great Nepalese artist went to China to spread the art of the Nepal overseas. So, with adequate funding from the goverment the art sector can flourish and can help the country for its international recognition.
A art can be regarded as great or epic if only it is appreciated by majority of the people and it doesnot loses its essence along with time. So, to produce this kind of art, the artist have to spend a large about of time in his art. It is said that some of the artist like Picasso and Van Gough have spend more than a year to produce a single painting. If the artist is not well funded then the it will be finacially impossible to produce art with his limited time. Some of the great artist in the past have struggled financially in their life becasue of lack of funding from anywhere.Funding from government can help the artist to be financially stable.
But it can be argued that art can not be reproduced in many amounts just because it is well funded. The art will lose will lost its essence if it produced commercially and made available to all people. If the same kind of painting is displayed in every home then the essence of painting is lost. Art is usually borned from great passion, dedication from the artist himself rather than motivated by the finance. To reproduce good art in large amount is not feasible for the artist just becasue there is good money in it.
So, in conclusion the government should fund the art so that it can fluorish for international recognition and good financial status of the artist. But it should not be commercialized to the extent that the art losses it essence and becomes some commercial item that one can buy at supermarket.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , medicine
Engineering,medicine etc are noble professions but poetry,mu...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
...ine etc are noble professions but poetry,music,drama etc make the life more enjoyable....
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ci, he put Italy on the map of the world . Similarly in the case of Nepal, Araniko...
^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Similarly,
... he put Italy on the map of the world . Similarly in the case of Nepal, Araniko, one of t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...y for its international recognition. A art can be regarded as great or epic i...
^
Line 5, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...recognition. A art can be regarded as great or epic if only it is appreciated ...
^^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...out of time in his art. It is said that some of the artist like Picasso and Van Gough have ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... artist like Picasso and Van Gough have spend more than a year to produce a single pa...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...an a year to produce a single painting. If the artist is not well funded then the ...
^^
Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
.... If the artist is not well funded then the it will be finacially impossible to produc...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 468, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e to produce art with his limited time. Some of the great artist in the past have struggled...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 587, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Funding
...ecasue of lack of funding from anywhere.Funding from government can help the artist to ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
... is well funded. The art will lose will lost its essence if it produced commercially...
^^^^
Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ially and made available to all people. If the same kind of painting is displayed ...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... item that one can buy at supermarket.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 443.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62076749436 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58776254615 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79914545582 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440180586907 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0248512975 60.3974514979 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.4761904762 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0952380952 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397444720432 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132526664278 0.0831039109588 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930574882295 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242041429177 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786818764293 0.0667264976115 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.