Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
" A picture is worth a thousand words"
The quote clearly states the significance of the art. Art can have a lasting impact on human mind, and can convey very long messages in subtle yet effective way. Art can many times be used as a tool to influence people and their decisions. Tool is not in its pure form good or bad but the way it is used decides whether it is perceived as good tool or bad tool. Government funding can help the art to flourish, but only if government does not explicitly controls its form and provides necessary independence to the artists.
Throughout the hisory, it is evident that art has flourished in the kingdoms who have supported art by providing them necessary fundings and applauding artists for their work. Some Mughal Badshahs supported artists by providing them necessary facilities and appraisals for their work. It was Akbar, who had Navratnas in his darbar who played major role for development of art in that era. It was the rewards given for their creations which influenced many artists. But some sycophant artists used their art to satisfy their greeds through praising the badshah to get more rewards from him. Such bias led to contamination of pure art form and broke its integrity, as pointed out by some. Art will flourish only if it is independent. Art was also used to influence a people to change their belief by depicting their traditional beliefs as wrong and bad and misrepresent the history.
Alternatively, art can be used as an effective tool to promote good habits. As many films and poetries can help bring change in the better way. During the Clean India movement, it was those subtle art forms which led the people to change their bad habits.
To conclude, to encourage artists to pursue the art as a career, it is required to have some financial support, and governments can provide it by various means. But this will only be effective if government decides to show no bias towards the form of the art. And the funding decisions are not made on the basis of the work of the artist.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'cans'.
Suggestion: cans
...ssages in subtle yet effective way. Art can many times be used as a tool to influen...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'control'
Suggestion: control
... only if government does not explicitly controls its form and provides necessary indepen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 360.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75833333333 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63353111072 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1111106098 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.1578947368 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26315789474 5.21951772744 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31234542964 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111606953062 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714515750522 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170276005479 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916541368458 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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