Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
An art defines a very fascinating language to convey thoughts, oppose evil practices and carve history of the human society. The artist with there unique insight present the world with the unseen perspectives of nature. The art as well as artist cannot be made without having adequate availability of funds. The government being the ruling body of the region is whole and sole responsible to encourage them by providing funds. Also, some evil practices have been observed to acquire the returns from the artist. Thus, need to be aware of such malpractices.
An art can be of different kinds such as painting, carving, music, acting and others. The formation and presentation process of such arts need money in the world. The artist since early days always are passionate about arts. They always try to carry out certain experimentation to gain and insight and show the world new visions of the surrounding. Also, it is not sufficient to just create art, it is also important to take it to common people. A very fascinating person of such nature is Pu. L. Despande. He was multi-talented personality with skills such as music, comedian, writer, media pioneer, etc. He did all such experimentation through the generous donations of some rich people, government and support of his artist friends as well. Thus, to flourish art the funding can be considered as an important factor.
The artist is wholely responsible for discovery of different kinds of art. The artist being a human also has some basic necessities to live. To dedicate full-time to art will really be challenging for the artist if no proper arrangement is made for his daily chores. Also, employement opportunities through different schemes can be introduced to attract new comers. This will encourage diverse and drastic development of art. I remember of an article that describes the contribution of J.J. School of Arts in 19th centuary. This step gave India with extremely talented artist in different fields. Thus, thinking about artist must be undertaken by government itself.
The one possibility is cruel practices that were reported from some past incidents. The artist were lend money for there experimentation, but due to huge debts result into harrasment of those artists. The lenders made artist to perform malpractices against there will and ethics. From such situation one name that rambles in my mind is Raja Ravivarma. He was an extraordinary skilled painter and had an ambition to reach out his art to common peoples. For that he took loan for printing press establishment and was unable to return those. The money-lender started harrassing him by life threats, burning printing press and making him to paint salacious paintings. The government while lending money must also keep track of such incidences.
Finally, I would like to say that the artist are like small plant, if we shape them by providing adequate resources they will flourish and rise as a star in the world. Thus, I believe government must support such extraordinary peoples with funds.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... having adequate availability of funds. The government being the ruling body of the...
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Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
... the world. The artist since early days always are passionate about arts. They always try ...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... The artist being a human also has some basic necessities to live. To dedicate full-time to art w...
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...ed from some past incidents. The artist were lend money for there experimentation, b...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'lent'.
Suggestion: lent
...om some past incidents. The artist were lend money for there experimentation, but du...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...esult into harrasment of those artists. The lenders made artist to perform malpract...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, really, so, thus, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2539.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08817635271 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85501450555 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531062124248 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 781.2 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 15.0 4.99550561798 300% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 33.0 20.2370786517 163% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4931337155 60.3974514979 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9393939394 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1212121212 23.4991977007 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24242424242 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259993699992 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655359713255 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688274528136 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143254388406 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576923372156 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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