Some people believe that government officials must carry out thte will of the people they serve. others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your postion, you should address both of the views presented
The author has presented two views that are common in today's world where people in government positions with power to create change are either subjected to the will of the people or make judgement on their own will.
If we take a close look at both views, they are supposed to complement each other to some extent regardless of the contrast or similarity between the views of the people. Also, external factors such as funds, viability and sustainability also automatically force the two views to come into action. But in all, the second view still stands true because in the end, the final call is made by the officials whether it is to carry out the will of the people or not.
Let us begin by looking at a situation where the masses are presenting similar views on education policy. For instance, the people are all agitating for free primary school education for all. A government official would first of all look at the situation on ground, reason with the people's opinions, look into the status of the government coffers, look into how funding for the free education can be obtained and also look out for so many other factors before a final decision or judgement can be made. He or she cannot just succumb to the people's will like that without ensuring that the outcome of agreeing to such wills would be viable or sustainable or both.
In cases of contrasting views, the situation can get a bit more complex to pronounce judgement. The outcome of the judgement would favor some and disfavor others. Regardless, the ideal thing to do would be to listen to the different opinions of the people and then do the relevant background checks and try to look for a diplomatic solution that would try to favor everyone.
A simple example to explain it all can be seen in the family. Where the children are the people and the parents are the government officials. Many times, the children can all exclaim that they want ice cream. The parents, even if they wanted to carry out their will still need to check that the available funds are sufficient to get the ice cream. If not, their judgement would be no icecream! In this instance, the will of the people would have been carried out, but other factors affected the decision of the government officials.
Essentially, the opinions of the people should be first soughted out for before a final pronouncement can be made. It is never a must that the government officials carry them out. the will of the people. However, it is a must for the officials to base their decisions on their own judgement assuming the officials are free, fair and just.
These judgement however must be based on well informed opinions obtained from the people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...he government officials carry them out. the will of the people. However, it is a mu...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this judgement' or 'These judgements'?
Suggestion: This judgement; These judgements
...the officials are free, fair and just. These judgement however must be based on well informed ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, second, so, still, then, well, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 26.0 12.4196629213 209% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 12.9106741573 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 472.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72033898305 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6610686524 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52015361269 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457627118644 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.336214014 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.095238095 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4761904762 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280020318905 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913824545706 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757534853766 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152447862411 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881737081217 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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