Some people believe that it is helpful to view a challenging situation as an opportunity for
personal growth. Others believe that reimagining challenging situations this way occupies
too much of the focus one needs to face challenges effectively.
Challenging situations provide opportunity for personal growth. So, everyone should see challenging situations as a chance to improve their personality.
In this material world mankind has to deal with numerous challenging situations throughout his life. Those are the times which are very essential to become a man from a boy, and those times teach mankind how to deal with the world effectively. During those time one should not become upset, however he should see it as an opportunity to improve himself to face the harder challenges waiting for him in the future to come. We the mankind, when comes into the world, are the weakest compared to the all species living in the earth. From the birth till death we face problems and challenging situations and those events improve our personal growth. Every great person in the earth has faced challenging times in their times and considered those situations as an opportunity for personal growth. For instance, Bangabondu Sheikh Mujib, the former President and father of Bangladesh, has faced countless challenging situations in his entire life even before death. He were immured several times for challenging the rule of Pakistan over Bangladesh, East Pakistan that time. In 1952 he was captured by the police for protesting against the ruler in order to maintain Bengali as the mother language of his countrymen. But the ruler failed to placate hime, they only gave him the opportunity to become stronger in mind. Those challenging times made him a great leader and ultimately he freed his countrymen from the autocratic rule of Pakistan. It was not possible for him to know in advance about how much focus will require to face the challenge of earning independence. So, he must have to face those challenges with his best effort and ultimately he succeed.
Every time a passenger plane takes off the contribution of Wright brothers are remembered with profound gratuity. They invented the aeroplane and the paths of them were not so easy. They were failed numerous times before they ultimately succeed. Criticism, ridicule of the mass people along sides the challenges of making a new thing-they have to face all of them and those things only made them harder and increased their strength of mind. They approached to the problems they were facing with much focused look and they eventually succeed. However, it was not possible for them to know how much effort they should give in order to face the challenge of flying in the blue open sky. The thing they only can do is to improve themselves.
One must face new challenges with a intention to improve his personal grow
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 963, Rule ID: PERS_PRONOUN_AGREEMENT_SENT_START[5]
Message: Use third-person verb with 'He': 'is' or 'was'.
Suggestion: is; was
...n his entire life even before death. He were immured several times for challenging t...
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Line 5, column 1518, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: facing
...vance about how much focus will require to face the challenge of earning independence. ...
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Line 5, column 1646, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'succeeds'.
Suggestion: succeeds
... with his best effort and ultimately he succeed. Every time a passenger plane take...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 35, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... One must face new challenges with a intention to improve his personal grow
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02054794521 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66501735604 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461187214612 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 689.4 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9174217714 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6086956522 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0434782609 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04347826087 5.21951772744 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258290311039 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916977136355 0.0831039109588 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798041526523 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188355525998 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764707494903 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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