Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
A lot can be understood about the society on the basis of the political leader they select. And governing a nation is task of utmost responsibility. Many a times the political leaders might face a crisis in choosing between 'what the people want' and 'what is right for the society'.
Political leaders always come across the decision making conundrum. Every country has their own cultural, political history. So the way of leading each nation is different. For instance, India is a country with 28 states and over 19000 different languages or dialects with so many different religious beliefs. So there is bound to happen some clashes or quarrels. So a leader cannot pass a decision just for the approbation from a majority of people. He should see that no injustice is done to any group of people. A lot of livelihoods do depend on the decision taken by the leaders and it is their duty to serve people and refrain from thinking about personal or political benefits in the line of duty.
Therefore, in my opinion the leader should remain consistent to particular principles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84239130435 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74166872557 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 215.323595506 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0291224484 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188647612114 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639595877682 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544150106004 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143120393236 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253255441594 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 100.480337079 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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