Some people believe that our ever-increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction. Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Technology improve and make our life better everyday. But some people believe that exponential use of technology is reduce the opportunities for human interaction, whereas some believe including me, that technology provide us the new and improved ways to communicate and build connection with one another. Its true every day there are thousand of inventions are made, that makes our life easy in very aspect of our daily life . Communication is yet another area where technology has developed its strongly, by inventing ways to make these connect to one another easily.
Firstly, earlier when technology was not so advanced, people used to afraid to travel far, because of the family as, they won't be able to connect with him so often. Families won't know the well being of the person, they won't the conditions or situation the person who has gone. However, in today's world is easily for people to travel, work and stay in different state or different continents, and this is all possible with the help of technology. Today, we cannot just talk to person who is far but also see them with the help of video calls and stay connected to them properly. This also possible since technology is going us new and effective way of communications. For example, Whatapps , snap chat, Facebook messenger, Call facility are few application that help us stay connected to the people who are not with right now.
Secondly, Technology also helps to to connect with people whom we know but, also help us getting connected with new people. This help us open new prospect for us in terms of getting job or give us a platform where we can raise our voice. For Instance, Linkedin is application available today through internet which help us get jobs based on our qualification with the help connection made by us in the app. Again, Twitter is yet another application where people can put forward there view or raise concern and you can get response from thousands people and that might helpful.
In conclusion, as our needs for communication is increasing day by day, technology is providing us better ways to communicate and make our easier by doing so. Even though some people might argue that it reduces human interaction, the advantages over weighs the disadvantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...nology improve and make our life better everyday. But some people believe that exponenti...
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Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...e that exponential use of technology is reduce the opportunities for human interaction...
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Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...e another. Its true every day there are thousand of inventions are made, that makes our ...
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Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...fe easy in very aspect of our daily life . Communication is yet another area where...
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Line 1, column 494, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...her area where technology has developed its strongly, by inventing ways to make the...
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Line 7, column 689, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of communications. For example, Whatapps , snap chat, Facebook messenger, Call fac...
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Line 7, column 741, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun application seems to be countable; consider using: 'few applications'.
Suggestion: few applications
..., Facebook messenger, Call facility are few application that help us stay connected to the peop...
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Line 11, column 33, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...w. Secondly, Technology also helps to to connect with people whom we know but, a...
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Line 11, column 90, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to get' or 'get'.
Suggestion: to get; get
...h people whom we know but, also help us getting connected with new people. This help us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95275590551 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72917276772 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535433070866 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6482249777 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.9375 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8125 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.484828316649 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159160759215 0.0831039109588 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133600399276 0.0758088955206 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308660530586 0.150359130593 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110857412959 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.