This topic raises the controversial issue that whether scientific discoveries have given us a much understanding of the world or makes it complex. Though some scientific discoveries made us to know various complex matters, I think that scientific discoveries as well as science made our life easy and helped to understand the world easily.
Without science, it would be very hard to survive in the world nowadays. Now, we can predict the weather and climate very easily. It is science which made weather predictable, now we know when the cyclone will come. Therefore, we can now prepare for those kind of disaster. Without this, most people would die.
It is science that helped us to understand the universe and solar system. Now we know that the Earth is moving around the Sun while in the earlier time it was thought that the Sun is moving around the Earth. With the knowledge of astronomy, many nations are thinking to find a suitable planet to live as for this, we already stepped on the Moon.
There are many scientific discoveries, in many fields such as mathematics, which helped to evaluate further scientific works and discoveries. Einstein invented calculus which is really easy to undestand and helped to discover a lot of things with the help of calculus. In Biology, with the help of science. we now know how our body works, which part does what thing. In medical science, nowadays it is a simple surgery needed to transplant an organ. Without a better understanding of science, it would be impossible to think.
In conclusion, scientific discoveries might be made our life complex at some point such as inventions of dynamites, gums, bombs knowing different diseases, alien things and many other things but our society already complex. It is various positive scientific discoveries that made our life easy, effective and how the world really works.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...er scientific discoveries have given us a much understanding of the world or makes it ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 250, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...come. Therefore, we can now prepare for those kind of disaster. Without this, most people ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 307, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
.... In Biology, with the help of science. we now know how our body works, which part...
^^
Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be impossible to think. In conclusion, scientific discoveries might be made our...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, therefore, well, while, as for, i think, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 2235.4752809 70% => OK
No of words: 312.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99358974359 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71837200381 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1154889429 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5555555556 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257734227101 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780334411029 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924010667823 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150696276004 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119996770703 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.