Some people believe that society should try to save every plant and animal species, despite the expense to humans in effort,
time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts,
especially at a great cost in money and jobs, to save endangered specie
The Earth is home to wide variety of plants and animals. Due to increase in human population and sophisticated lifestyle humans adopted, humans resorted to deforestation
and encroachment of lands - that are home to many plants and animals. Because of such activities, balance of nature is disturbed and many plants and animal species
are getting extinct. Since it is people who are mostly responsible for endangering the trees and animal lives, some argue that we as society should make an effort to
save the plants and animals from extinction no matter the cost and effort it takes. Other beleive that such extraneous steps are not necessary given the expense. In
my opinion, I mostly agree with the statement that we as humans should try saving the plant and animals that are getting extinct because of the following reasons.
To begin, it is our collective duty as humans to save the endangered species when we look at the issue from moral ground. Our evolution has disturbed the lifestyle
of many species and even destroyed their chances of survival. Human greed to want more came at the cost of lives of many species. Do we as humans have any right to
do such atrocious things to other species? Do we get to decide who lives and who dies just because we are intelligent species? The answer to both the questions may
have different answers from different persons. But morally, it is now correct on our path to take other species lives just because it benifits us. Already many birds,
animals, plants have gone extinct due to lack of suitable habitat and many more are on the way to become history. If we do not act now, we maybe late in saving other
lifeforms and we have their blood on our hands.
Aditionally, even if we look at it from pragmatic perspective that benifits humans, we should not let the plants or animals die because it will damage the ecosystem
and harms even human. Different life forms need to coexist to maintain a balance and survival of one species depends on another directly or indirectly. Albert Einstein
once said that, "If all the bees in the world die, humans will become extinct in the next 4 years". Likewise there are several other plants and animals we need to survive.
Deforestration and cutting down of trees is causing rise in temperature which is leads to melting of icebergs that leads to flood. Also, plants produce oxygen that
humans survive on. In this age of pollution, we need to plant more trees to curb pollution and decrease global warming not because we have to do favor to other but ourselves.
Therefore, in such cases it is vital that we protect and save plants and animals.
However, going too far to save few plants or animals that would not make much of difference to homo sepians and does not disturb the balance of nature may not be a
good idea. We humans have our share of needs to be fulfilled. Many people in the world are dying due to lack of food, poverty, and disease. Ignoring such people and
spending way too much on flora or fauna may not be the proper thing to do. We should try to ensure decent lifestyle to every human. Also, to progress scientifically
we need to experiment on certain beings and it may harm the survival of few living things. Such steps maybe harsh but needed to be done to progress.
In conclusion, humans as a whole should definitely come together and do their part to save all lifeforms and make earth a suitable planet for the rest too. Failure to
do so will result in extinction of different species that harms our own survival. We have been polluting nature since stone age. It is time we come together and stop such
atrocities. However, we should also consider the cost and effort needed to protect other species and it should not come at the expense of our own survival or expense
of taking money that feeds a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3198.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 678.0 442.535393258 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71681415929 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.10278680062 4.55969084622 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46648536445 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 297.0 215.323595506 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438053097345 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1012.5 704.065955056 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.2370786517 173% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2047213135 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3714285714 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3714285714 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08571428571 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.97078651685 503% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259590076647 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691633984173 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06262168383 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084002604456 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543392348057 0.0667264976115 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.