Sports stars & movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility."
Movie stars and sports players are the exemplar for myraid of population in their respective field. They motivate all the generations from young to mature. But the main impact is on the young individuals because they see their idols, observe them and then finally try to follow the similar path as they like to achieve the summit. It is naturally a duty of everyone not only stars even the society and parents of the young to try to fulfill their social resposibilities as much as possible.
Moreover, there has been numerous of incidents and gestures where the famous celebrities try to motivate the people and help them. It is the person's generosity which motivates him towards the kind deeds towards the society. There are sundry of examples from all over the world where the stars proved and acted accordingly to the expectations and need of the society. The famous Bollywood actor Mr Akshay Kumar donated a good amount of funds to help the people who were strucked in the Kerela floods in 2018. Apart this he is always among the highest tax payers in the country.
Apart from philanthropic acts of money there are many different ways in which the stars motivate the people and generate a social awareness. They have the power to influence many people around them and by doing social awareness movies, displaying the importance of fitness and good health they can help the young genration to follow right path and not deviated by any nuances. For example the famous indian cricketer Rahul Dravid had taken initiative to aware people against the smoking detriments and do several television advertisments to aware people. Hashim Amla(a famous South African cricketer) denied to advertise an alcohol selling brand which costed him some part of his match fees also.
But as the issue mentioned it's the duty of every individual not just of the starts. I do not think of any mandatory obligations. It is always not necessary for every star to be doing social acts as the society demands from him. Sometimes(like for a sportsman), the most important work is to raise his country's name to the apex. That is what his social duty at that time. They might be earning millions but they do pay taxes which helps society and had to practice a lot to achieve a success. It's not just a auspacious moment or a serendipity he have to work to create that moment. So just seeing their earning will might a wrong interpretaion of expectations from them.
The issue well focuses on a big role of the celebrities and stars. They have a large fan base. So they can have an influential factor on their fans so it is their duty to enlighten their followers to a right path and help them to find their destiny not being influenced by some malevolent aspects of the society. The stars have a influential power and they must use it to bring positivity among the country and society around them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: FAMOUS_CELEBRITY[1]
Message: Use simply 'celebrities'.
Suggestion: celebrities
...ous of incidents and gestures where the famous celebrities try to motivate the people and help the...
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Line 2, column 141, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ate the people and help them. It is the persons generosity which motivates him towards ...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...m philanthropic acts of money there are many different ways in which the stars motivate the pe...
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Line 3, column 505, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun television seems to be countable; consider using: 'several televisions'.
Suggestion: several televisions
...e against the smoking detriments and do several television advertisments to aware people. Hashim A...
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Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'denied advertising'.
Suggestion: denied advertising
...im Amlaa famous South African cricketer denied to advertise an alcohol selling brand which costed h...
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Line 3, column 689, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... costed him some part of his match fees also. But as the issue mentioned its the du...
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Line 4, column 28, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... fees also. But as the issue mentioned its the duty of every individual not just o...
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Line 4, column 503, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... lot to achieve a success. Its not just a auspacious moment or a serendipity he h...
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Line 4, column 543, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...a auspacious moment or a serendipity he have to work to create that moment. So just ...
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Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...ten their followers to a right path and help them to find their destiny not being influenced by s...
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Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... aspects of the society. The stars have a influential power and they must use it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2372.0 2235.4752809 106% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73453093812 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5540792126 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49500998004 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 745.2 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7796253366 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.88 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.04 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238118308826 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612156537962 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440825434967 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13330933357 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351906499917 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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