Do sports stars and movie stars and have an obligation towards their fans or masses for that matter. Yes, I believe that movie stars and celebrities have a moral obligation towards their but i disagree with writers statement that they should fulfill their moral responsibility as a return or repayment for millions of dollars they earn. I would explain my reasons in below.
Firstly, any artist like a movie star, sports personality gets paid for their efforts their talent. People love their art, talent, and hance reward them. Thus these celebrities earn millions of dollars. For eg Virat Kholi he is a talented cricketer earns his money because of his talent. Now if expect him to follow every social norm care about his image when he is public wold affect his cricketing carrier as he would be focusing on these things rather than his game. Which would affect him as well as his team?
Secondly being socially responsible or behaving like a role model is a personal choice. One cannot be forced to act in a certain manner just to please people. Every human being has a different personality it is formed by childhood upbringing, situations faced in his/her life. One cannot simply change that by simply flipping a switch.
One might argue that many young people look up to these celebrities. And hence can get influence by their bad social behavior. I would say that one can change their role model if he is not socially responsible, or makes seem many times in the past of worst social behavior. As people would stop following these immoral people they would stop being relevant. Which would be better than changing someone's behavior or making someone act like someone they are not.
Hence I would like to conclude by saying every human being is different. and making someone compulsory do somethings just for the sake of image would rather be counterproductive. Good social behavior, social responsibility are inherent character one which cannot be imparted in an individual instantly. And hence I fell it will be wrong to expect role models loke movie stars, sports stars to be socially responsible in return for the money they are being paid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91530054645 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57586522718 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527322404372 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7452130784 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7727272727 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236113627296 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688351152984 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856164297437 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13732341457 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942204913957 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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