Journalism is often sited as the fourth pillar of democracy. Media often helps to show the reality of our society.And with the emergence of internet everyone can now write a blog .Which has deteriorated real journalism. I agree with the claim and its reason.I would present my reason in the below paragraph.
As said above with the emergence of technology anyone with a sound internet connection and average writing skill can publish an online article. For eg the news of riot in Texas was circulating on social media sites, these new was also then took upon my famous media outlets. But after further research, it turned out to be fake news.
Journalism should always be neutral and unbiased. It shouldn't be affected or influenced by political motives. But as any one can now writer news article. These articles are often politically motivated. A sound eg of which can be 2016 US Presidential election where fake news about one of the presidential candidate where being circulated on social media. Which may arguably lead to this candidate's defeat.
One must not disregard every information dispatched online on this blogosphere. This emergence of the blogosphere has motivated common people to write. Wherein you don't need to have a journalism degree to write about your views.
In sum, with the emergence of the blogosphere has in some cases weakened the political discourse. Where articles with political motives are being encouraged. Which has really decreased the standards of modern-day journalism?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, really, so, then, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 2235.4752809 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 245.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81672874975 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7774420931 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3888888889 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6111111111 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185228684127 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591996995769 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534426587217 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101822475786 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491351955441 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 48.8420337079 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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