We should totally accept the truth that discipline alters the way we say the world,discipline acts as major part of our life which show a lot of things in different directions.Having good discipline in oneself would make us a better human first then any other achiever. Discipline is not only the factor responsible for us to perceive the world but there are other factors too.For example a person might have proper discipline within him but he might be really good at heart and help others who are in need.
Disciplines should be thought from a early age only,this will help the children to see the world in different perspectives.It can be subject in the school where students can learn it. Discipline should be thought by parents of the child too.For instance we take a situation where a boy in school liked one of his friend pencil ,that boy will tend to steal that pencil from him if he does not have proper discipline.But if his does,then he would ask his mother or that friend only to get another similar pencil to him.Hence discipline make a person better human and increases the ability to think in various ways.
If a human lacks discipline it might cost him a lot in his life,it might get that person down in his career too.For example once a great male director in film industry misbehaved and molested a women who was one his movie caste,due to this bad behavior his fame and money got effected to him and his lost a beautiful career. This lose is only because that director did not have proper discipline in him,if he had good discipline he would never molest or misbehave with a women.
The argument can be concluded by saying that discipline plays a major role in once life and it would really effect it.Having proper discipline would not get you into bad situations and would also let you think different outcomes from different perspectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, really, so, then, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 327.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71559633028 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68150558129 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 23.0359550562 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.8643575577 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.285714286 118.986275619 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.7142857143 23.4991977007 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2857142857 5.21951772744 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159382793573 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861354934593 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615685049623 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101514542941 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638884116241 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 14.1392134831 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.25 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.1743820225 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 11.2143820225 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.