The statement advocates the idea about the success in life. Generally, we heard the stories of various successful personalities, the struggle they had to bear to get that peak of life. However, the stories are only heard and praised only when they become successful. There are more untold and unexplored explored stories like that. The question arises, why they are listened? That is because they took the risk and every possible chances they can grab.
One had to step down to the river to cross the river. He should pass through that danger of being drown into the river. He/she should that risk. Similarly, life is like that. Our life is full of risks. That risk is also a golden opportunity towards the success. The great Bollywood actor, Shah Rukh Khan, ran away from his home with an aim in his eyes to become a actor. He took that risk to step in the train of City of Dreams, Mumbai. He risked his life. He had to risk his family. Then, later his risk gave him the fame and name he has now. We can also give an example of a businessman and manufacturing companies. Every time they have to risk their investment with a new product, new innovation with an anticipated success in future.
Secondly, another point worth noting here is a taking risks is a part of a success. Even if he fails in risk, he/she had already known many the path of success, He/ she will sure get success obviously in the second attempt. None can get success with a folded hand. He has to risk his time, mind, money etc in full extent to be a successful person. However, taking risk didn’t mean extraneous and frivolous investments.
On the contrary, it is said that" Planning is already 50% success'. One should plan carefully to accomplish any task. We can go through the procedure, discipline, a track, then only we would get success. Risk may cause a detrimental damage to your life and profession, while careful and cautions planning lead you to success for sure sooner or later. Many successful people suggest you to go through this way.
Thus, life is full of ups and downs. The person who can cope up with the difficulties of life and take a risk attains the success in his/her life. However, risk should be taken with a proper care and planning which has the only end and that is an ultimate success in a life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 364, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... home with an aim in his eyes to become a actor. He took that risk to step in the...
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Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... of Dreams, Mumbai. He risked his life. He had to risk his family. Then, later his...
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Line 2, column 686, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...sk their investment with a new product, new innovation with an anticipated success in future. ...
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Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... innovation with an anticipated success in future. Secondly, another point worth noting ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'detrimental damage'.
Suggestion: detrimental damage
...ly we would get success. Risk may cause a detrimental damage to your life and profession, while care...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, thus, while, as to, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57590361446 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45863913019 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522891566265 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 6.24550561798 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0697813318 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.34375 118.986275619 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.96875 23.4991977007 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.0625 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273830599722 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072886669926 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515798086988 0.0758088955206 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159750870469 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044468570574 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 14.1392134831 47% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 48.8420337079 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.1743820225 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 12.1639044944 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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