The topic provides a claim and reason behind how imagination is more important than experience in life. However, experience is an despincible integral part in anyone's life. As like a proverb, a experience counts, it is quintessential to consider the hard work and pain the person had cost to gain that experience.
Though a successful person once imagines about a new innovation for the first time, he/she had to spend his time, money and mind to gain efficacy and perfection in a certain sector. Even a lay person is a imaginator in the world. It cost apparently nothing to imagine but it is really difficult to turn that imagination into reality. It is not like that an experienced person cannot imagine. It would be more pragmatic to mention that a imagination from a experienced person would be more salutary than that of imagination by the lay man. Imagination of a people can go beyond the universe, while it needs a devotion and experience to turn that virtual imagination to reality. Imagination only works in a unreal world. One has to be grounded and step out of that imagination and do effort to fulfill it. Only practical work and experience on it can teach us can teach us about the what is right and wrong, what should be the next step after it.
People who lack experience rather imagine out of box which could be completely stupidious and irrelevant to what is actually aimed. Experience give a corrigible and tractable direction towards achieving the objective. Taking into the account of great scientists from the past, they have imagined various theories and they also needed a hard work and passionate interest to prove those imagination to be correct. Right Brothers who made aeroplane for the first time also had imagined that one day human will also fly in the sky like the bird. But, it also need to be take into account that they had to work hard, day and night, to prove their imagination true. If the great leader Martin Luther King had only imagined about the liberty and freedom of the black americans without taking any actions, there could not have been rights and equality among black and white american.
In conclusion, it not not a big deal to imagine something. Experienced person may have a attitude which is rather a positive attitude which even inspire him/her to the work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...erience in life. However, experience is an despincible integral part in anyones li...
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Suggestion: an
...art in anyones life. As like a proverb, a experience counts, it is quintessential...
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Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...successful person once imagines about a new innovation for the first time, he/she had to spend...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
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... a certain sector. Even a lay person is a imaginator in the world. It cost appare...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t an experienced person cannot imagine. It would be more pragmatic to mention that...
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...would be more pragmatic to mention that a imagination from a experienced person w...
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...atic to mention that a imagination from a experienced person would be more saluta...
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...n to reality. Imagination only works in a unreal world. One has to be grounded an...
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... practical work and experience on it can teach us can teach us about the what is ...
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...the what is right and wrong, what should be the next step after it. People who ...
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...rrigible and tractable direction towards achieving the objective. Taking into the...
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Message: Did you mean 'this imagination' or 'those imaginations'?
Suggestion: this imagination; those imaginations
...d work and passionate interest to prove those imagination to be correct. Right Brothers who made ...
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...ad imagined that one day human will also fly in the sky like the bird. But, it al...
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Suggestion: needs
... in the sky like the bird. But, it also need to be take into account that they had t...
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...into account that they had to work hard, day and night, to prove their imaginatio...
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Suggestion: not
... and white american. In conclusion, it not not a big deal to imagine something. Experi...
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Suggestion: an
... something. Experienced person may have a attitude which is rather a positive att...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, while, as to, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 400.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7875 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69828533517 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4925 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2970400765 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.75 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287352238695 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949730251608 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698873389402 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162694820562 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700690766052 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.