The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or
scientists, but the general wellbeing
of all its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or
examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement could be summerized as the success of a nation is determined through how well being of all nation’s people regardless achivements of nation’s rules ,artists and science. This statement is not true as it could be investigated through a set of evidences.
For instance, a nation whereas all of it’s people are well being, should be an incomplete nation and need foriegner expats to perform some of works. To demonstrate, a high living standard of all people in a nation indicates that certain set of jobs are not accepeted to be performed by this nation’s people. Whereas, a high standard of living nation would need expats to perfrom tough physical works for example. Thus, an incomplete uncompatable nation is experienced if all people of this nation were well being people. Best nation is the nation where a graduate distribution of it’s individual along the various living standards.
Furthermore, the sate of well being of individuals is continously redefinitioned. Whereas, by the time the live standard of people is highered, the need of more lexurey life of people is needed. Thus, it is not realistic that a sate of well being is a steady state, which a society could experience along an expansive intervals of times. It could only be such as ephemerical state, if not a never existing realistic state.
Conversely, well being of all people could be experienced through a long lasting circumstances when a state of economical growth is experienced, which indicates high level of education, science and arts among this nation.
For example, a great nation is a nation where leading economics, science and arts are experienced on the other rival opponenet nations. Consequently, such a comparable aspects could be addressed in order to compare between nations greatness other than a state of individuals well being that might not last long for a long period of time.
Eventually, these previoulsy illustrated evidences provide a proper investigation in order to validate the extent of the author’s statement. Consequenctly, based on these evidences, the author’s statement is not validated under the discussed perspectives.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dless achivements of nation's rules ,artists and science. This statement is n...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vestigated through a set of evidences. For instance, a nation whereas all of it...
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Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the works') or simply say ''some works''.
Suggestion: some of the works; some works
...on and need foriegner expats to perform some of works. To demonstrate, a high living standard...
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Line 2, column 202, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...monstrate, a high living standard of all people in a nation indicates that certai...
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Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...xperienced if all people of this nation were well being people. Best nation is the n...
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Line 2, column 535, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
... of this nation were well being people. Best nation is the nation where a graduate d...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al along the various living standards. Furthermore, the sate of well being of i...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ious living standards. Furthermore, the sate of well being of individuals is contino...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... needed. Thus, it is not realistic that a sate of well being is a steady state, which ...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'interval'?
Suggestion: interval
...ety could experience along an expansive intervals of times. It could only be such as ephe...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... not a never existing realistic state. Conversely, well being of all people cou...
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Line 4, column 85, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'circumstance'?
Suggestion: circumstance
...d be experienced through a long lasting circumstances when a state of economical growth is ex...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...g lasting circumstances when a state of economical growth is experienced, which indicates ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n, science and arts among this nation. For example, a great nation is a nation ...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'aspect'?
Suggestion: aspect
...ations. Consequently, such a comparable aspects could be addressed in order to compare ...
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Line 5, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... nations greatness other than a state of individuals well being that might not la...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ing that might not last long for a long period of time. Eventually, these previoulsy illus...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t last long for a long period of time. Eventually, these previoulsy illustrated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1839.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31502890173 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19401823427 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476878612717 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6975250315 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.9375 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118823119144 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481141012347 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396066737266 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647889424283 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326536038675 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.