The surest indicator of a great nation is not the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but the general well-being of all its people.
The life conditions of the nation are one of the most important things nowadays. The prompt claims that prominent leaders, artists and scientist do not represent the people's well-being. I strongly agree with this statement for two reasons, which I will explain below.
To begin with, the beneficial achievements of one human being from all nation do not mean that people's life-satisfaction increase. When scientists discover new information or artists gain acknowledgment from all over the world it might be helpful for a narrow community, but not for the whole nation. For example, when prominent scientist Mendeleyev discover new chemical composits that are used for production of main drugs, the well-being of his nation does not change. Therefore, in order to undersdant is the nation powerfull or not, we need to relye on life satisfaction and well-being of all its people.
Secondly, true indicator of a great nation is general well-being because its relyies on statistics and can be calculated. For example, recent researchs of the local scientist conclude that overall life satisfaction increase by 30% in lust 5 years, and strongly correlate with economic improvent and social prosperity. As a result, indicators such as well-being and life satisfaction represent that the nation has great power.
In conclusion, people can not judge about the power of the nation only from scientists, artists, rulers and so on. Statistical indicators can represent power. The life conditions of the nation are one of the most important things nowadays. The prompt claims that prominent leaders, artists and scientist do not represent the people's well-being. I strongly agree with this statement for two reasons, which I will explain below.
To begin with, the beneficial achievements of one human being from all nation do not mean that people's life-satisfaction increase. When scientists discover new information or artists gain acknowledgment from all over the world it might be helpful for a narrow community, but not for the whole nation. For example, when prominent scientist Mendeleyev discover new chemical composits that are used for production of main drugs, the well-being of his nation does not change. Therefore, in order to undersdant is the nation powerfull or not, we need to relye on life satisfaction and well-being of all its people.
Secondly, true indicator of a great nation is general well-being because its relyies on statistics and can be calculated. For example, recent researchs of the local scientist conclude that overall life satisfaction increase by 30% in lust 5 years, and strongly correlate with economic improvent and social prosperity. As a result, indicators such as well-being and life satisfaction represent that the nation has great power.
In conclusion, people can not judge about the power of the nation only from scientists, artists, rulers and so on. Statistical indicators can represent power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2476.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 462.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35930735931 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03894870559 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.300865800866 0.4932671777 61% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2481481066 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401506011355 0.243740707755 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140765013058 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101755252989 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231863403872 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848896629691 0.0667264976115 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.6 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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