The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
A great nation is the one that has prosperity among its people. Further, its history, science and technology and rulers at past adds to its richness. The prompt as it is suggests that the general welfare of the people is vital indicator of the great nation. I mostly agree, with the given statement for the following reasons.
Firstly, for a nation to boast its greatness it should provide the citizen with the basic needs. If a country does not have proper infrastructure developed; people are dying of hunger, improper health facilities. Also, if the education facilities job opportunities are festering then, no matter, how rich the history of the nation was or it has advanced arms and ammunition. The fact cannot be ignored that the people are suffering and pleading for the help. And, nation cannot be called the great, as it is ignoring the basic components that its people right to health, education and employment.
Secondly, the nation, with proper infrastructure development and is able to provide its people with the basic fundamental rights is considered great. For an instance, a nation where the people are getting propre health facilities and get timely cure, advanced education to compete with the shrewd mind around the world as well as add in its countries benefit along with the proper food and transportation facility are much happier than the people that lacks it. Also, then only a greatness of a country is descried. On the other hand, if there is a famous artist in that nation and is acclaimed world wide and also earns handsomely. But, the artist earns for himself where majority are suffering. So, people being the core of the nation must be nurtures well.
Lastly, some might argue that the history of the great rulers and creation of the nation with the wars that were fought bravely makes or the art of the artist that has its mar on the history or the revolutionary finding in the science would make a nation great. However, they must know it is feasible to some extent and cannot be applicable always. These things are additional points that would embellish the greatness. The true greatness of nation lies in the happiness of the people, its contribution to the world peace and prosperity.
In conclusion, the greatness is a subjective matter, but the people being core and their welfare the greatness of the nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... artist in that nation and is acclaimed world wide and also earns handsomely. But, the art...
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Line 2, column 595, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... artist in that nation and is acclaimed world wide and also earns handsomely. But, the art...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...to some extent and cannot be applicable always. These things are additional points tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91545189504 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66332873679 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504373177843 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6929024263 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.21951772744 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241659896529 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823608595666 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589729699976 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161602191367 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201180827799 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.