Is the general welfare of people an indicator of the greatness of the nation? Probably the answer is yes for many people since the welfare of people is the basis for the development of one nation. But is this the only indicator of whether a nation is excellent or not? Achievements of people in the nation, like rulers, artists and scientists, are also important criterion for the judgement of whether a country is great or not.
To begin with, the achievements of a nation's ruler is directly connected with the development situation of a country. Great rulers tend to perform well on securing the country and leading social and economic development. George Washington, the first American president, led the suppressed people to fight against the colonists and won the war, after which the United States of America was born. He also played an important role in the making of the first constitution of US in 1787. Abraham Lincoln, one of the greatest American presidents in history, has successfully pushed the enforcement of the abolition of slavery in US. He, as the leader of the united nation, also won the Civil War, preventing the schism of America. His accomplishment has left a tremendous impact in world history as a great leader of US. America in their presidency deserves to be called a great nation.
Secondly, art plays a vital part in human society. Genius artists keep attracting people from worldwide and purifying their spirits with artists' impressive masterpieces. Leonardo da Vinci is a gifted Italian painter in the Renaissance period. His most famous work, Mona Lisa, has proved its value as one of the most precious painting in human history. Michelangelo, the great Italian sculpture artist, also left his impact in history with his sculpture works like the David. Their works have attracted millions even billions of people to enjoy the extreme beauty in museums. It's undeniable to praise Italy during the Renaissance period a great nation.
Moreover, advances in science should not be ignored since it has profoundly changed the way people understand the world. Newton, the English physicist, has enlightened the whole world with his law of general gravitation and the laws of motion. His works reveals law of forces and motion from apples to planets. It was his research that opened the door to modern science. Maxwell, the physicist who pointed out the rules of electric between magnet, clear the barriers on the way to utilizing electric and magnet for humans. With them, England is sure to be called a great nation.
In sum, the general welfare of people should not be the only indicator of a great nation. Accomplishments of its ruler, artists and scientists are also vital judgement criterions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 453.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04194260486 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75688186968 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507726269316 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9088207163 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.5925925926 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7037037037 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180306390484 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525288993026 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057765302955 0.0758088955206 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110816722963 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481864919352 0.0667264976115 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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