The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Although I agree with the statement that the general welfare of a nation’s citizens should be an indicator of a great nation, I also believe that the achievements of a nation’s rulers, artists, or scientists should be included as one of the indicators of a great nation.
A nation is made out of its citizens, and the purpose of a nation is to serve its people. I believe that most people would agree with the general welfare of the citizens should be how we value the greatness of a nation. Imagine if we see starving children and wars in a nation on television, we would not be complimenting this country or eager to visit this place, but instead, we would hope our country not to be like that. Clearly, the greatness of a country can be defined by the welfare of its people.
Nevertheless, in order to increase the general welfare, a nation should also depends on its ruler. The president of a country is capable of helping a nation grow in economic development and social stability which are important factors to increase welfare of the people. Good policies from the current political party can increase jobs in the workforce since economic development rests on political decisions and changes. For example, during the financial crisis in 2008, President Obama lowered taxes and providing aids for each state for infrastructure development. This policy resulted in a large decrease in unemployment and help the United States to fight the recession. In this case, the achievement of a ruler did help a nation become greater.
Furthermore, scientists also help a nation become greater. Scientists in different fields help the lives of ordinary people become better. Scientists in medical fields create medicines and machineries to help people recover from sickness. If antibiotics haven’t been discovered by scientists, many simple sickness that we considered nowadays might be fatal to human beings. It is only due to the achievements of these scientists that we are able to live a healthy and long-living life. Therefore, we can surely say that the achievements of scientists can indeed make a nation great.
In conclusion, I believe that the greatness of a nation should be defined by not only the welfare of its people but also the achievements of its rulers of scientists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
...e general welfare, a nation should also depends on its ruler. The president of a countr...
Line 7, column 299, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun sickness seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much simple sickness', 'a good deal of simple sickness'.
Suggestion: much simple sickness; a good deal of simple sickness
...n't been discovered by scientists, many simple sickness that we considered nowadays might be fa...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0365535248 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98206387833 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469973890339 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9517600169 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.166666667 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2777777778 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 5.21951772744 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34296121819 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112942054471 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120879724681 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224173540973 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108591131271 0.0667264976115 163% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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