Teachers' salaries should be based on the academic performance of their students.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
For a Teacher all of the students are equally important and they fell everyone of them should do well in not only exams but in life. I disagree with the fact that a teachers salary should be based on their students peformance. This is because the tests and exams during school life, cannot judge the future of an individual and hence cannot be used as decisive factors for altering the salary of an tutor. The following points will furthermore help consolidate my stance on the topic.
The salary of an individual should be based on his skill, and not the random outcome of his work. A teacher may give one hundred percent effort in teaching his students, but that doesn't mean the students score one hundred percent each in a test which is going to determine his pay. The scoring by individual student depends on their capability to undertsand the topic and ability to perform admist the tension of an examination. This is a very complex situation, as poor performance maybe due to uncontrollable reasons and not the incapabilty of the teacher, like difficult questions/ out of context question in an external exam. Rather a teacher should be given bonus if the students perform well and base salary no matter how students perform.
A teacher starts to asses her students the day she starts teaching them and knows the potentional of most of the students in the class. Sometimes it may happen the average performance of the class in the teacher's assesment turns out to be poor. Which may lead to the situation where, teacher will not give full effort as the students are weak or not interested in the subject. This can lead to situations beyond the control of the teacher as uninterested students, will always perform poorly in an academic test. These students may have joined the class just for extra credits and passing the subject.
The education a teacher provides in an classroom is not limited to subjects and trivial details of academics, but extends to character determining qualities like honesty, kindness and many more. These qualities truly define an student when he grows up and enable him to be sucesful in life. For instance, a student may perform well in exam by self studying at home, but It will be difficult for him to develop social skills which a tutor can impart based on their experiences in the past. The good scoring student without social skills may turn out as an intorvert and perform poorly in workplace, taking longer times to adapt in new social situations. Hence, a teachers true job is not limited to explaing subjects but to prepare a student for his life. Making it difficult to asses true performance.
It is not possible to measure the effort and skill of anyone based on random outcomes, so it is unfair to decide the salary of a techer based on academic performance of thier students. The salary should be based on the experience, skill and qualifications and not results, this does not mean that year after year all students of the particular teacher keep failing academically, this should have repurcussions-but this is a very rare sight in the real world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2577.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 535.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81682242991 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80937282943 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66820973203 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467289719626 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 795.6 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3796435234 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.136363636 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3181818182 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260976305363 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864315338991 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691448251211 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157935221693 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021167143168 0.0667264976115 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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