Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
A book cannot be judged by it's cover, very precisely counters the reason given in the prompt. A nation cannot be judged by the achievemnets of some of It's people excelling in various crafts. The nation must be judged as a whole, I disagree with the given claim and reason in the prompt for the follwoing reasons stated below.
The porsperity of the nation cannot be judged by achievemnets of some people belonging to the nation, this gives a belies the nation infront of the viewers. For instance, germany was ruled by Hitler in the past and his reign of terror made his egregious in the eyes of people all around the world. Similiarly cannot be said about the germans who lived and are living to this day, that would be unfair to judge them based on actions of one person. Another case can be asumed that once a ruler who governed over a vast land was very generous, but due to natural calamities and catastrophes the nation fell, in this case the ruler was generous but still the poeple didn't get a prosperous and good life. Similarly, can be said about Guru Rabindranath Tagore, he is renowned as one of the best artist and poet in the world, this doesn't mean everyone in his nation is educated, and living a prosperous life. So, It is impossible to generalize a nation's population's life style based on achievemnets of few people.
Achievements by a certain individual do not show the properity and greatness of a nation, a nation may have the best painters, singers, dancers, athletes, leaders in the world, but it cannot still guarantee greatness of the nation. As, a nation is the aggregate of all the individuals and their qualtites , life styles and culture. For instanace, the cricket team of nation 'X' may win the world cup every year, this doesn't mean X is the great nation. It simple means X's national team is the best in the competition at that particular time. Similarly, can be said about all the other fields.
Though in some cases, A nation maybe identified by the achievements of it's leaders and their actions. For example, Mahatme Gandhi led the Apartheid movement in South Africa and helped fight racial discrimintaion all around the globe while preaching peace and sacrifice. This made him known all around the world and he is still respected in every nation around the globle. This made the name of his Nation known all around the world, but still the nation and it's people faced supression from the british and didn't lead a happy life till 1947. This portrayed the greatness of the nation by the actions of it's leader but still the people of the nation didn't lead a good lifestyle.
Hence, the given claim maybe true in some cases, and the reason may support it in some, but for majority of the cases discussed here- the claim and reason hold no true value. They only show a very small part of the large picture and judge the book by it's face value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, similarly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38913681556 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426900584795 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 513.0 23.0359550562 2227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2319.0 118.986275619 1949% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 513.0 23.4991977007 2183% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 90.0 5.21951772744 1724% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37279842208 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.37279842208 0.0831039109588 449% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203308934988 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640074413672 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 256.4 14.1392134831 1813% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -432.3 48.8420337079 -885% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 201.0 12.1743820225 1651% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.42 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 31.91 8.38706741573 380% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.8971910112 462% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 207.2 11.2143820225 1848% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 55.0 11.7820224719 467% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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