Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The topic raises a controversial issue of whether Teachers' salaries should depend upon the students acadecmic score or not. Indisputably, some teachers are getting too much paid irrespective of the knowledge which they're giving to the students due to their experience and position. Nevertheless, most of the scholarly teachers are getting low salaries in every kind education system. That's the primary reason for teachers to go for other source of getting money like taking private tutions, doing part time jobs etc. Thus, for better education of people, teachers should be paid based on the performance of students so that they don't need to go for another source of getting money.
First of all, in today's era, no one would like to adopt the profession of teaching due to low salaries. Many scholarly people who would like to teach students have changed their profression from teaching. The only reason for that is low salaries and more amount of work. Other people who are experienced and not giving their 100 percent for teaching are getting high paid salaries. For instance, the head of department of most of the grad schools are getting high paid salaries apart from the junior teachers who are getting low paid salaries irrespective of the amount of knowledge they can give to students. Thus, if the system will change and the salaries are dependent on the amount of knowledge which teachers can devote to students, then it benefits not only the students or the education system, but also enhance the country's economy as most of the educated people could be getting the job.
Furthermore, many students have the capability to change the world, but due to the getting low knowledge from school teachers and lack of affordability of private coachings, they became uneducated or poor educated then others. If that system changes, then the future of those students will be preserved. Moreover, many students then like becoming a teacher rather then choosing some other profession. Thus, the education system needs to be changed in order to enhance the education rate of the country.
Finally, it's a great saying that teachers are the second parents of students. They are the one who can develop the skills of a student. A good teacher never belittle any student and would rather try to shape their skills and knowledge to another level. For instance, many students are getting good knowledge from teachers in various government schools since the teachers are getting high paid and hence they're putting their efforts only to focus on student's academic curriculum rather than focussing on other sources of getting money. These teachers are the one who are remembered by students for their life. Therefore, the education system should give the salaries according to student's performance so that most of the students could get a good amount of education from teachers and become respectful people in their lives.
In conclusion, a schools' reputation is fully dependent on the teachers. People would like to admit their child in the school where teachers are putting a huge effort in educating them. Although there are various factors which should be considered for enhancing the salary of teacher like their puncutality and attitude towards students etc., the knowledge is a huge factor for deciding the salary of teachers. Hence if a teacher is teaching well, definitely their salary should be enhanced if not already good.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 563.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10124333925 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58084700101 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404973357016 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 880.2 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7953770855 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.88 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.52 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191940983973 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701536597425 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463118328676 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134170989208 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371464566942 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.