Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Humans has progressed profoundly like never before since the last century. Our lives has inundated with technogical gadets. these technogies has made our lives better instead of complicating it.
without the advent of technogies our lives would have been more difficult. it saves lot of time and increase productivity. for instance mobile phone gadgets are ubiquitous now a days. one can book flights, navigate, listen to music, they can do many things which would have taken lot of time and efforts. computers can scan thousands of files and give us useful insights. robots are being used in the integration of automobile parts.Now a days many websites are using chatbots for communicaton with their clients which saves money and time.
Furthermore technology are being used by many corporations to increase their revenue. advent of artificial intelligence and machine learning changed the dynamics of lives. many ecommerce companies now has the ability to predict their customer choices based on their data using machine learning algorithms and as a result they are earning lot of profits. Had there been no AI and ML technologies ecommerce companies would not have earned huge revenues.
In conclusion, technology has made our lives simpler and more easier instead of complicating it. it is being used by many companies to make their work easier and humans use it to save their time and increase their productivity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1200.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 228.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26315789474 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78143495785 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0107677443 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122877486251 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538844879697 0.0831039109588 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795908019299 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933874764472 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613966864866 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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