"Too many people think only about getting results. The key to success, however, is to focus on the specific task at hand and not to worry about results."
What do you think this piece of advice means, and do you think that it is, on the whole, worth following? Support your views with reasons and/or examples drawn from your own experience, observations, or reading.
The statement commenting too many people think only about getting results and that the key to success, however, is to focus on the specific task at hand and not to worry about the result can be agreed upon. People tend to overthink or invest much of their time thinking only about getting the desired results. Success is not an overnight story, constant and hardworking efforts are required. People often fail to understand this which sometimes leads to overlooking the hardwork and determination. The efforts put in for the tasks at present determines the result of tomorrow and not vice versa.
Throughout the history there have been various examples which prove that working dilligently today and investing rightly is the key to success. One such example is of the famous scientist Galileo, whose theories were so beyond his time that they were used by later scientist for their research. Galileo always believed in hardwork and determination. He never spent his time thinking about what the future could be, he constantly worked on his research and theories related to earth and its Geometry. There many other physicists and scientists who believed that investing todat gives a better tomorrow.
Every individual should focus on the present instead of worrying about what the future might be, working today yields a better tomorrow. If we keep thinking about what might happen or what would this result into then we are overlooking what we currently have. One should always be constant in his work and ethical in doing things that shape the future. It is certain that nobody knows whats about to come, meaning one should worry about the present more than about the upcoming future. Rome was built in a night, but years of investing, hardwork and determination is what resulted in one of mightiest and strongest empires that the world has ever seen.
In conclusion, the key to success is to focus on the specific task at hand instead of stressing about getting the results. Working hard and patientfully is important towards getting intended outcome. We should always believe in constantly and dilligently working to get out desired result.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...future. It is certain that nobody knows whats about to come, meaning one should worry...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06478873239 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55897159963 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.832127456 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 5.21951772744 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363725036119 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107343429316 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118404892108 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225921765836 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118664050294 0.0667264976115 178% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.